Hi all

I was a little ambitious about my time in terms of working on Doc A consistent with the discussion yesterday.

I will do that work now 19h00-20h30UTC on Friday, so any comments in the doc before that I can take into account.

The main changes are:

- agreed to turn section 2 into an annex, with new text as in doc

- considered turning section 4's existing text into an annex, or leaving it aside from next draft

- merging section 4 and 5 into a single set of recommendations

- making sure the content is explicitly relevant to Staff Accountability insofar as that is consistent with what we were required to do by WS1's report.

The doc is here: <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wGRrJZ-i7WA0uYBIHaB5Q3ssqfRmbAcgHJwlQ6scHZY/edit?usp=sharing>

I won't make a new copy but will edit that doc in tracked changes, and then ACCEPT the changes once done. Most of the comments will stay in place.

Any questions, fire away and ask them here by email.

cheers

Jordan

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