Hi all In prep for our meeting Thursday 19 January at 19h UTC, Avri and Klaus and I have been prepping a second draft of the Document A paper. This will be a main agenda item at the call. You can find a clean copy here: <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wGRrJZ- i7WA0uYBIHaB5Q3ssqfRmbAcgHJwlQ6scHZY/edit#> Marked up from the last version, w lots of comments etc (and thus quite slow): <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wXuZw-VFeMLT3B5UHLU_nY1SWyzp6- VLeVZF1FY0UDk/edit> We think it needs a thorough edit to make it clearer and simpler to grab the key concepts, as at the moment it is quite long and opaque. *From this Thursday's call it would be great to get feedback and input from people, and your agreement to the possibility of another further edit. From there, the document can go into the CCWG once we do an online check for contentment.* What are your thoughts? Jordan -- Jordan Carter Chief Executive *InternetNZ * +64-4-495-2118 (office) | +64-21-442-649 (mob) | Skype: jordancarter jordan@InternetNZ.net.nz | www.InternetNZ.nz *A better world through a better Internet*