Hi, As was requested at our last meeting Patrick made the edits recommended in his contribution, which we discussed during the meeting, in response to the Board WS2 Caucus' objections to the recommendations from the group.. These changes are still in suggest mode and can be found at: <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vH5su7SDGE0i_rTstbYJ7tIaOFuRnV4dfqpwMTPo...> (pdf attached) The document remains open for comments and suggestions. Our main item of discussion at our next meeting will focus on these changes in an attempt to produce a document acceptable to the ICANN trinity of Organization, Board and Community in time to meet the current schedule for plenary reading. Please take the time to review and comment before our next meeting on 30 Aug at 19UTC. Thanks to Patrick for the work done and thanks to the rest of you in advance for your review of these suggested changes. Avri