Hi, With the exception of the mission section, I had the lightest look over this. Only one thing jumped or, in my case, failed to jump out at me. In the earliest part of the document, it'd be extremely useful to have a short (and I mean short) bit about why this is different from draft 2. In the spirit of, "Don't criticise, send text," here's a suggestion, but I do not care whether even one word of this is included. I just think it would help the reader. <head>Why this round of changes?</head> The previous draft report from the CCWG received a large number of comments and engendered much discussion on teleconferences and in-person meetings. Many of the comments were substantive suggestions for major changes to the report. The CCWG has concentrated on these large, substantive issues in its latest work. The major areas of change are the major headings of this document. Something like that. If I somehow missed this -- entirely possible given the depth in which I read -- then this little summary needs to be made more prominent so that the interested reader not following the details of the CCWG will catch it quickly and know how to navigate to their issues. I hope this is helful. Best regards, A -- Andrew Sullivan ajs@anvilwalrusden.com