This seems all good to me Bernie, thanks! Cheers Jordan On Thursday, 28 January 2016, Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard@gmail.com> wrote:
All,
The CCWG comment period on recommendation 3 is now closed and no comments were received.
However staff has noted that the Right of Investigation was not included in the list of elements to become Fundamental Bylaws in paragraphs 1 and 18.
This is not considered a significant change given Recommendation 1 does list the Right of Investigation as a Fundamental Bylaw.
As such this amendment has been made and the attached version is considered final.
Given there were no significant changes from the legal review version this will not be re-submitted for a final legal review (lawyers will review the complete package when it is completed).
A red-lined version showing these amendments, as well as a clean version are attached for you convenience.
Thank you.
Bernard Turcotte ICANN Staff Support for CCWG
On Mon, Jan 25, 2016 at 10:49 AM, Bernard Turcotte < turcotte.bernard@gmail.com <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','turcotte.bernard@gmail.com');>> wrote:
Per the request of the co-chairs we are publishing the final draft version of Annex 3 for comments by the CCWG.
This version is the version produced by legal counsel with the additional edit of correcting 8 powers to 7 powers.
You will find attached 2 documents, one with track changes (staff and legal) and the other a clean version.
The comment period for the CCWG will run from 18:00 UTC Monday 25 January and will close at 18:00 UTC Wednesday 27 January - providing the 48 hour comment period.
Please make your comments via email to the full CCWG list and use the following subject line to identify your email as being a comment on this:
*CCWG - Recommendation 3 - Final draft for CCWG comments*
or simply reply to this email.
Comments will be compiled in semi-real time by staff in a google sheet at: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1YNvRyLsJ4EYXv83-Munrva6mgWW-bsGDmphH...
Thank You.
Bernard Turcotte ICANN Staff Support for CCWG
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