I have not had the time to do a de novo review of the current draft from a WP2 perspective, but I have reviewed it for changed in response to the ALAC comments. Following are issues which to the best of my knowledge, I cannot find any appropriate changes. MISSION, CORE VALUES Page 33: In the infamous "ICANN shall have no powers" section (those words since removed), I have been assured that there will be instructions to the lawyers so that the final crafted Bylaw will make it clear that for the purposes of this section, the identifiers themselves will be deemed not to be content. A footnote in the Annex would give me some comfort. Page 35: "Preserve and enhance the neutral and judgment free operation of the DNS...". The ALAC had problems with this clause. At some point I was told the words came directly from the AoC. I cannot find them. What is the rationale and exactly how is ICANN supposed to do this. I can accept ICANN taking no actions to violate this, but the wording is far wider than that. Page 38: "Depending on market mechanisms to promote and sustain a healthy competitive environment in the DNS market.". The original text was preceded by "Where feasible and appropriate". ICANN has a responsibility to uphold the public interest, and to do that it must be able to make value judgements as to when the open market mechanisms are sufficient and when it must intervene. Adding the words "healthy" and "bottom up" are not sufficient to accomplish that. Nowhere: Article 3 of the AoC includes the text "promote competition, consumer trust, and consumer choice in the DNS marketplace". Consumer choice and consumer choice did not make it into the revised Bylaws. The ALAC is not overly concerned with consumer choice, but is very concerned about consumer trust. It must be incorporated. IRP The IRP still includes that ability to address conflicting panel discussions (there was talk about handling these in another way, but I can find no such text). However, the outcomes of the IRP do not allow for a decision to address this kind of IRP. Alan