The redline on Jordans PDF looks normal to me I think... -James from my phone so cant look at the .doc ________________________________________ From: wp2-bounces@icann.org <wp2-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Burr, Becky <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz> Sent: 30 July 2015 20:20 To: Malcolm Hutty; Jordan Carter; Accountability Cross Community Cc: wp2@icann.org Subject: Re: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work Not what I¹m seeing malcolm J. Beckwith Burr Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006 Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 / becky.burr@neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz On 7/30/15, 3:17 PM, "Malcolm Hutty" <malcolm@linx.net> wrote:
No, that doesn't seem right. I think you may have got the version control the wrong way round: crossing out what was added and showing what was deleted.
This can happen when you do Document Compare in Word, but get the "original" and "new" documents reversed.
On 30/07/2015 20:00, Jordan Carter wrote:
I have PDF'd Becky's redline just sent, and reattach the Word and send to the CCWG as well as back to WP2
On 31 July 2015 at 06:54, Burr, Becky <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz <mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz>> wrote:
J. Beckwith Burr____
*Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer____
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006____
Office: + 1.202.533.2932 <tel:%2B%201.202.533.2932> Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 <tel:%2B1.202.352.6367> / becky.burr@neustar.biz <mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz <http://www.neustar.biz>
From: <Burr>, Becky Burr <becky.burr@neustar.biz <mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz>> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 12:48 PM To: "wp2@icann.org <mailto:wp2@icann.org>" <wp2@icann.org <mailto:wp2@icann.org>> Cc: Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard@gmail.com <mailto:turcotte.bernard@gmail.com>>, "grace.abuhamad@icann.org <mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>" <grace.abuhamad@icann.org <mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>> Subject: IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work
With huge apologies for late delivery, I¹ve attached a draft of the report text revised to reflect our decisions. I am willing to put the draft bylaws language in the report as an appendix, but I don¹t think its fully cooked right now.
J. Beckwith Burr____
*Neustar, Inc. /* Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer____
1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006____
Office: + 1.202.533.2932 <tel:%2B%201.202.533.2932> Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 <tel:%2B1.202.352.6367> / becky.burr@neustar.biz <mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz <http://www.neustar.biz>
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