Dear Colleagues, FYI attached is the feedback we have received from Jan Aart Scholte, our independent Advisor. Jan raises some very useful points for our further deliberations. I would suggest we count this as "public comment input #1" and add this to our upcoming public comment analysis tool. Best Mathieu -------- Message transféré -------- Sujet : Re: [CCWG-Advisors] CCWG near final draft proposal Date : Sun, 3 May 2015 14:14:43 +0000 De : Jan Aart Scholte <jan.scholte@globalstudies.gu.se> Pour : Adam Peake <adam.peake@icann.org>, CCWG-Advisors <ccwg-advisors@icann.org> Dear All Attached the promised more substantive comments for the CCWG on the draft proposal of 1 May 2015. Really impressive that things have got this far already, though as ever there can be suggestions for going further. Greetings Jan