Hi Andrew, Apologies for the delayed response. Wanted to confirm that we (staff) are proofreading the drafts to correct this error. Thank you, grace On 2/19/16, 6:33 PM, "accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org on behalf of Andrew Sullivan" <accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org on behalf of ajs@anvilwalrusden.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
On Wed, Feb 17, 2016 at 10:09:18PM +0100, Thomas Rickert wrote:
The revised sections have been posted at https://community.icann.org/x/iw2AAw <https://community.icann.org/x/iw2AAw> for your final review.
I've reviewed the documents in respect of previous comments, and found that the requested corrections were made, save one. Staff, thank you for catching all that.
The one change that is still not quite all there is the "protocols and parameters" bit. For instance, I found it on p 37 and p 39 of the main report. I think just searching for "protocols and parameters" in all the documents may turn up some other examples -- I have not checked them all, but given these two there may well be more. The "and" should go away.
Best regards,
A
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