My apologies Robin. Your edit was indeed noted in the meeting notes. Here is the updated version with your edit included. From: Robin Gross <robin@ipjustice.org> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 12:09 PM To: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org> Cc: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary This document still says a "culture of accountability" instead of "transparency" for WS2, as was pointed out in the call this morning. WS2 is instituting at "culture of transparency" at ICANN. Everything we do falls under "accountability" - WS2 addresses how "transparency" will help ICANN to be more accountable. Thanks, Robin On Jul 30, 2015, at 8:56 AM, Grace Abuhamad wrote:

Dear all,

Sharing on Mathieu¹s behalf the updated Executive Summary:

Updates include: - WS1 definition included - language to clarify that powers are escalation path - Added mention of IFR challenge (Sabine's point) - removed () around Human rights WS2 issue.

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Hi Sebastien, Thank you for your edits to the Executive Summary. These edits have been incorporated in the final freeze version (attached). Best, Grace From: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien@bachollet.com> Date: Friday, July 31, 2015 at 11:23 AM To: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org> Cc: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary Please find attached a redline version including some proposal to enhance the Executive Summary. All the best Sébastien Bachollet +33 6 07 66 89 33 Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/ Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien@bachollet.com> De : <accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org> Date : jeudi 30 juillet 2015 18:16 À : Robin Gross <robin@ipjustice.org> Cc : Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org> Objet : Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary

My apologies Robin. Your edit was indeed noted in the meeting notes. Here is the updated version with your edit included.

From: Robin Gross <robin@ipjustice.org> Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 12:09 PM To: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org> Cc: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Updated Executive Summary

This document still says a "culture of accountability" instead of "transparency" for WS2, as was pointed out in the call this morning. WS2 is instituting at "culture of transparency" at ICANN. Everything we do falls under "accountability" - WS2 addresses how "transparency" will help ICANN to be more accountable.

Thanks, Robin

On Jul 30, 2015, at 8:56 AM, Grace Abuhamad wrote:

...

Dear all,

Sharing on Mathieu¹s behalf the updated Executive Summary:

Updates include: - WS1 definition included - language to clarify that powers are escalation path - Added mention of IFR challenge (Sabine's point) - removed () around Human rights WS2 issue.

Best, Grace <Executive Summary_3007.docx><Executive Summary_3007_redline.docx><Executive Summary_3007_redline.pdf><Executive Summary_3007.pdf>_______________________________________________ Accountability-Cross-Community mailing list Accountability-Cross-Community@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/accountability-cross-community

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