Thanks Becky. I note that in Core value 3, "To the extent feasible and appropriate" should be in red indicating it has been deleted and in new Core Value 4 "healthy" should be in blue. Alan At 25/08/2015 04:30 PM, Burr, Becky wrote:

I’ve put together a chart with the requested comparison. Hope it helps. Alice, I assume someone will post as appropriate

Thanks,

Becky

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From: Alice Jansen <<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>alice.jansen@icann.org> Date: Monday, August 24, 2015 at 5:04 PM To: Accountability Community <<mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org>accountability-cross-community@icann.org> Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Call with advisors

Dear all,

This is to inform you that as part of your outreach and public comment process, a call will be held on Monday, 31 August - 13:00-14:00 UTC to collect CCWG-Accountability Advisors' input on the Second Draft Proposal.

May we also take this opportunity to remind you that your third webinar is scheduled for tomorrow – Tuesday, 25 August – 18:00-20:00 UTC – see <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_news_announcement-2D2015-2D08-2D17-2Den&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=K8FtNNpGHlaPf7ETYlJuJgAQePUzQkTolyXPGDRrr0I&e=>https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-08-17-en for details.

Webinar Q&As on your second draft proposal are compiled on a wiki page at: <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D54695403&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=Kz0jkM7qEYKZq1RnxhMHR3_B-Nzuy6kOCTetvVBKq38&e=>https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=54695403

Thank you,

Kind regards

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Dear Becky, Thank you very much for this very useful comparison. I wonder whether a third column with an objective impact assessment of the changes would be available, in order to better understand what each and every change intends to achieve specifically and what impact this would have on current ICANN activities and operations. If this would to be done I would recommend that the explanation is inserted directly into the column and that we refrain from just inserting references to sections in the report as this makes the reading and understanding of the changes much more difficult. In addition to the foregoing, perhaps it would be useful to extend this comparison to any other specific Bylaw changes proposed in the Report, in order to benefit from a complete picture of what is being proposed at this level in one single document. Best regards, Jorge Cancio Von: accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org] Im Auftrag von Burr, Becky Gesendet: Dienstag, 25. August 2015 22:31 An: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>; accountability-cross-community@icann.org Betreff: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values I've put together a chart with the requested comparison. Hope it helps. Alice, I assume someone will post as appropriate Thanks, Becky J. Beckwith Burr Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006 Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 / becky.burr@neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz> From: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>> Date: Monday, August 24, 2015 at 5:04 PM To: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org<mailto:accountability-cross-community@icann.org>> Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Call with advisors Dear all, This is to inform you that as part of your outreach and public comment process, a call will be held on Monday, 31 August - 13:00-14:00 UTC to collect CCWG-Accountability Advisors' input on the Second Draft Proposal. May we also take this opportunity to remind you that your third webinar is scheduled for tomorrow - Tuesday, 25 August - 18:00-20:00 UTC - see https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-08-17-en<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.icann.org_news_announcement-2D2015-2D08-2D17-2Den&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=K8FtNNpGHlaPf7ETYlJuJgAQePUzQkTolyXPGDRrr0I&e=> for details. Webinar Q&As on your second draft proposal are compiled on a wiki page at: https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=54695403<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__community.icann.org_pages_viewpage.action-3FpageId-3D54695403&d=AwMFAw&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=62cJFOifzm6X_GRlaq8Mo8TjDmrxdYahOP8WDDkMr4k&m=BNS6-fw3KiCGmOQYj256ItxJ0SBM0tdpByV98zLIN6c&s=Kz0jkM7qEYKZq1RnxhMHR3_B-Nzuy6kOCTetvVBKq38&e=> Thank you, Kind regards Alice