Draft Statement for AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting in Abu Dhabi (ICANN 60)
Dear colleagues, I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679). As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French. We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement. Kind regards, Sarah
Dear colleagues, I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679). As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French. We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement. Kind regards, Sarah
Dear Sarah et al, please see attached my comments on the document shared. Regards Esther Patricia On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 9:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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Dear Sarah et al, Please find my comments attached in documents. Kind regards Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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Hi Sarah, Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc. Kind Regards Bram Sent from my iPhone On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss <afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote: Dear Sarah et al, Please find my comments attached in documents. Kind regards Beran On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com<mailto:skiden@gmail.com>> wrote: Dear colleagues, I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679). As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French. We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement. Kind regards, Sarah <AFRALO-AfrICANN_Final Draft.with Ali Comments.docx>_______________________________________________ AFRI-Discuss mailing list AFRI-Discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:AFRI-Discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> https://atlarge-lists.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/afri-discuss Homepage for the region: http://www.afralo.org Posting guidelines to ensure machine translations of emails sent to this list are more accurate: http://www.funredes.org/mistica/english/emec/method_emec/presentation.html#a... <AFRALO-AfrICANN_Final Draft.with Beran Comments.docx>
Hello Sarah, We have received 3 corrections to the draft statement so far, out of which I have even seen some errors again, for example, paragraph 2 line 2, the last word shows Possible, with a capital P, this is a simple typographical error. I suggest that AFRALO-AfrICANN should have a Media/Publicity Committee, made up of volunteers. There are several tools that the volunteers can use to work together without necessarily meeting physically. With this committee, any release will be rigorously discussed at that level and necessary corrections will be made before it comes out. It will also save us the trouble of having to receive several corrections to our release from individuals. I offer myself to volunteer as part of this committee if considered. Regards, Raymond Selorm Mamattah Accra, Ghana On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com> wrote:
Hi Sarah,
Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc.
Kind Regards Bram
Sent from my iPhone
On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss < afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Dear Sarah et al,
Please find my comments attached in documents.
Kind regards
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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I Concur with Bram’s suggestion. A google doc would definitely make it easy to follow comments and corrections. Cheers Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com> wrote:
Hi Sarah,
Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc.
Kind Regards Bram
Sent from my iPhone
On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss <afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote:
Dear Sarah et al,
Please find my comments attached in documents.
Kind regards
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com <mailto:skiden@gmail.com>> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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Dear all, Thank you for your suggestions and comments. The document has been uploaded to Google Docs. Please find it through this link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1feVry8fi74Mto6zVve-uNvhhQvLvKOkx0uo8M6s9.... Please note that the document is in comment mode only. Suggested changes will be made into the document. Thank you, Sarah On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 12:46 PM, Beran Dondeh <berandondeh@yahoo.com> wrote:
I Concur with Bram’s suggestion. A google doc would definitely make it easy to follow comments and corrections.
Cheers
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com> wrote:
Hi Sarah,
Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc.
Kind Regards Bram
Sent from my iPhone
On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss < afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Dear Sarah et al,
Please find my comments attached in documents.
Kind regards
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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Ok, noted. Thanks Sarah. On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 12:10 PM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear all,
Thank you for your suggestions and comments. The document has been uploaded to Google Docs. Please find it through this link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1feVry8fi74Mto6zVve- uNvhhQvLvKOkx0uo8M6s9Ehg/edit?usp=sharing. Please note that the document is in comment mode only. Suggested changes will be made into the document.
Thank you,
Sarah
On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 12:46 PM, Beran Dondeh <berandondeh@yahoo.com> wrote:
I Concur with Bram’s suggestion. A google doc would definitely make it easy to follow comments and corrections.
Cheers
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com> wrote:
Hi Sarah,
Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc.
Kind Regards Bram
Sent from my iPhone
On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss < afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Dear Sarah et al,
Please find my comments attached in documents.
Kind regards
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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Sarah, Thank you for the prompt response. Thanks Bram ________________________________ From: Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> Sent: Thursday, October 19, 2017 12:10:04 PM To: Bram Fudzulani; Beran Dondeh Cc: Afri-Discuss; AfrICANN list Subject: Re: [AFRI-Discuss] Draft Statement for AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting in Abu Dhabi (ICANN 60) Dear all, Thank you for your suggestions and comments. The document has been uploaded to Google Docs. Please find it through this link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1feVry8fi74Mto6zVve-uNvhhQvLvKOkx0uo8M6s9.... Please note that the document is in comment mode only. Suggested changes will be made into the document. Thank you, Sarah On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 12:46 PM, Beran Dondeh <berandondeh@yahoo.com<mailto:berandondeh@yahoo.com>> wrote: I Concur with Bram’s suggestion. A google doc would definitely make it easy to follow comments and corrections. Cheers Beran On Oct 19, 2017, at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com<mailto:beatblam@hotmail.com>> wrote: Hi Sarah, Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc. Kind Regards Bram Sent from my iPhone On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss <afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote: Dear Sarah et al, Please find my comments attached in documents. Kind regards Beran On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com<mailto:skiden@gmail.com>> wrote: Dear colleagues, I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679). As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French. We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement. Kind regards, Sarah <AFRALO-AfrICANN_Final Draft.with Ali Comments.docx>_______________________________________________ AFRI-Discuss mailing list AFRI-Discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org<mailto:AFRI-Discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> https://atlarge-lists.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/afri-discuss Homepage for the region: http://www.afralo.org<http://www.afralo.org/> Posting guidelines to ensure machine translations of emails sent to this list are more accurate: http://www.funredes.org/mistica/english/emec/method_emec/presentation.html#a... <AFRALO-AfrICANN_Final Draft.with Beran Comments.docx>
Great job Sarah, we will surely include our comments Regards Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 10:19 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com> wrote:
Sarah,
Thank you for the prompt response.
Thanks Bram From: Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com> Sent: Thursday, October 19, 2017 12:10:04 PM To: Bram Fudzulani; Beran Dondeh Cc: Afri-Discuss; AfrICANN list Subject: Re: [AFRI-Discuss] Draft Statement for AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting in Abu Dhabi (ICANN 60)
Dear all,
Thank you for your suggestions and comments. The document has been uploaded to Google Docs. Please find it through this link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1feVry8fi74Mto6zVve-uNvhhQvLvKOkx0uo8M6s9... <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1feVry8fi74Mto6zVve-uNvhhQvLvKOkx0uo8M6s9...>. Please note that the document is in comment mode only. Suggested changes will be made into the document.
Thank you,
Sarah
On Thu, Oct 19, 2017 at 12:46 PM, Beran Dondeh <berandondeh@yahoo.com <mailto:berandondeh@yahoo.com>> wrote: I Concur with Bram’s suggestion. A google doc would definitely make it easy to follow comments and corrections.
Cheers
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 9:04 AM, Bram Fudzulani <beatblam@hotmail.com <mailto:beatblam@hotmail.com>> wrote:
Hi Sarah,
Just a suggestion if it was not already discussed, it would simplify tracking changes to the document if we made it a google doc.
Kind Regards Bram
Sent from my iPhone
On 19 Oct 2017, at 11:00 AM, Beran Dondeh via AFRI-Discuss <afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org <mailto:afri-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org>> wrote:
Dear Sarah et al,
Please find my comments attached in documents.
Kind regards
Beran
On Oct 19, 2017, at 6:22 AM, Sarah Kiden <skiden@gmail.com <mailto:skiden@gmail.com>> wrote:
Dear colleagues,
I hope this email finds you well. Please see attached a draft statement for the upcoming joint AFRALO/AfrICANN meeting scheduled for 1 November 2017 in Abu Dhabi, during the ICANN 60 meeting. The topic selected was General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) (Regulation (EU) 2016/679).
As agreed during the call for topics, a drafting team was constituted to write the statement. Please take a look at the document attached and get back to us in the next couple of days to allow us compile final comments/edits as well as translate the document into French.
We would like to thank Barrack Otieno, Ali Hussein, Juliet Maina, Tijani Ben Jemaa, Seun Ojedeji, Aziz Hilali and all the people who contributed to drafting this statement.
Kind regards,
Sarah
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Beran Dondeh -
Bram Fudzulani -
Isaac Maposa -
Patricia Akello -
Raymond Mamattah -
Sarah Kiden