See below. At 19/05/2015 03:40 AM, Sébastien Bachollet wrote:
Hello, Thanks Alan for this draft. As I am in a place where the Internet cnx is very poor, I can¹t really use Wiki for those comment. I will try to give you my comments here. - TO ADD - (to remove)
Lines 28/30 S the ALAC would - STRONGLY - preferS to accept (the) - A - compromiseS
"A" does not go with the plural compromiseS. Please give me the exact sentence you are suggesting.
Line 106 S this - TYPE OF - compromise.
ok
Lines 143/146 I don¹t think we want to push to a possible separation from ICANN. It is where we risk to loose the multistakeholder model all in one. If we have to go to this construct, I would like to suggest that the PTI Board be either: - the full ICANN Board - a subset of the ICANN Board (if the IANA Board committee would have been still in function it would have been a good candidate).
We have already said we are still debating the Board, so I am omitting all versions of what some people (including me) are suggesting. The sentence in question was not a reference to separation, but I have nevertheless changed it. Alan
Thanks All the best
Sébastien Bachollet +33 6 07 66 89 33 Blog: http://sebastien.bachollet.fr/ Mail: Sébastien Bachollet <sebastien@bachollet.com>
Le 19/05/2015 07:08, « Alan Greenberg » <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> a écrit :
The first draft of the proposed comment on the CWG report has been posted.
The full set of community comments and the draft can be found at https://community.icann.org/x/XConAw. The PDF version of the draft comment is also attached to this e-mail.
The deadline for submission is tomorrow, Wednesday, 20 May, and the ALAC will be ratifying the submission after-the-fact.
If you have not yet looked at the draft comment, please do, as there is little time left to provide feedback.
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