Olivier and I have reviewed the draft statement on the CCWG Proposal - word by word. We have made a significant number of edits which substantially improves its readability and hopefully it acceptability to the community. Both of us believe that to be the case. And hopefully I have not introduced any additional typos. The Wiki has been updated - https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw, and both redline and clean versions are attached here for your convenience. Alan