Thanks Jordan. Alan At 05/06/2015 02:00 AM, Jordan Carter wrote:

hi all

I'd just like to say this is a well thought out and excellent contribution to the CCWG's deliberations - thank you!

best Jordan

On 5 June 2015 at 12:15, Alan Greenberg <<mailto:alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote: Olivier and I have reviewed the draft statement on the CCWG Proposal - word by word.

We have made a significant number of edits which substantially improves its readability and hopefully it acceptability to the community. Both of us believe that to be the case.

And hopefully I have not introduced any additional typos.

The Wiki has been updated - <https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw>https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw, and both redline and clean versions are attached here for your convenience.

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