Dear Nirmol, Thank you for your very useful comments. We have incorporated most of your suggestions. See below for the instructions that have been sent to the designer to incorporate into the final version to be produced this afternoon PDT. As you will see, among the revisions, we have asked to include the link to the map of APRALO ALSes. Instructions to designer: Page 2: Left Panel: Under the heading 'Did you Know that': Third bullet, replace period (.) with question mark (?) Fifth bullet: replace "have" with "can make" Under the heading 'What is APRALO': Second paragraph: after the text "APRALO consists of civil society organizations, nonprofits, and individuals that represent the rights of individuals, insert the following phrase: "such as consumer rights group, legal bodies / professional groups, and government nonprofit organizations, etc." Begin new sentence: "These organizations and individuals represent the rights..." Second Paragraph: after the word "Sydney" insert: (For a map of APRALO ALSes, see: http://www.atlarge.icann.org/maps/apralo). Center Panel: Second Paragraph: prior to sentence starting "Find out more...", insert the following sentence: "If you are a group/individual or body interested in more actively participating in ICANN decision making you can either find an ALS which caters to our interest or region or alternatively apply to become a new ALS." Right Panel: Under the heading 'APRALO diversity': In the first paragraph, insert the following; "Indian sub continent and" before the phrase "Australasia in the south". Again, thanks for your comments which will strengthen the APRALO brochure. In order to have printed versions in time for the Brussels meeting, we will send the final version of the brochure to the printers later today PDT. Kind regards, Heidi -----Original Message----- From: apac-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:apac-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of nirmol agarwal Sent: Friday, June 11, 2010 4:04 AM To: Pavan Budhrani Cc: APRALO Subject: Re: [APAC-Discuss] APRALO Agenda for Brussels Dear Pavan, Can you confirm the receipt of my comments on the outreach brochure. Regards, Nirmol Agarwal On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 2:36 PM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> wrote:

Hi all,

Here is the link for the APRALO Agenda for the Brussels meeting, let me know if it is okay, if you wish to make comments or additions, shoot me an email and I will handle it online, cheers

http://brussels38.icann.org/node/12462<%20 http://brussels38.icann.org/node/12462>

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