Hi All, This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments. Pavan
At first glance, it looks good to go but I will give it another read and send a confirmation. Best Fouad Bajwa On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 6:21 AM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> wrote:
Hi All,
This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments.
Pavan
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Dear Pavan, This indeed is a marvelous job. However, I have some commnets on the same which are attached in a scanned copy. In case there is any difficulty with my writing I am also listing out the key comments below (for ease of reference the points below have the same numbering as given in the scanned copy): Under the heading ‘Did you Know that’: 1. It is advisable to have the list of countries for ease of reference to the reader who is not aware about the APRALO jurisdiction. 2. “?” typo error. 3. Instead of “have” it should be “can make” thus the revised line will read as follows: “As a member of APRALO, you *can make* a direct impact on the directions of …” Under the heading ‘What is APRALO’: 4. Where the reference to civil society has been made it should be explained through some examples and the following phrase should be added *“such as consumer rights group, legal bodies / professional groups, government nonprofit organizations etc*“ (this list is suggestive and non exhaustive so the group members are free to suggest changes to the same if any). 5. I suggest there should be a *link *to the page where the list of all ALSes already registered with APRALO is given, after the word “Sydney”. 6. To conclude the topic on what is APRALO we should add the following line: “*If you are a group/individual or body interested in more actively participating in ICANN decision making you can either find an ALS (already registered) which caters to our interest or region or alternatively form a new ALS and register the same with APRALO.* To find more log on to http://www.apralo.org..... ” Under the heading ‘APRALO diversity’: 7. What about other activities and working groups? 8. In the opening para I would like to suggest the insertion of the phrase “*Indian sub continent and*” before the phrase “Australasia in the south” Would be happy to discuss. Please confirm the receipt of this email. Regards, Nirmol K Agarwal Chair ISVK-India (www.jurisonline.in) On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 6:51 AM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> wrote:
Hi All,
This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments.
Pavan
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Dear Atlarge, I have send the following mail to Pavan and to the group. How can I confirm that the email has been received? This is urgent, since my do not want the comments to miss the printing. Regards, Nirmol Agarwal ISVK India ---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: nirmol agarwal <nirmolagarwal@gmail.com> Date: Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 1:26 PM Subject: Re: [APAC-Discuss] APRALO Brochure To: Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> Cc: APRALO <apac-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Dear Pavan, This indeed is a marvelous job. However, I have some commnets on the same which are attached in a scanned copy. In case there is any difficulty with my writing I am also listing out the key comments below (for ease of reference the points below have the same numbering as given in the scanned copy): Under the heading ‘Did you Know that’: 1. It is advisable to have the list of countries for ease of reference to the reader who is not aware about the APRALO jurisdiction. 2. “?” typo error. 3. Instead of “have” it should be “can make” thus the revised line will read as follows: “As a member of APRALO, you *can make* a direct impact on the directions of …” Under the heading ‘What is APRALO’: 4. Where the reference to civil society has been made it should be explained through some examples and the following phrase should be added *“such as consumer rights group, legal bodies / professional groups, government nonprofit organizations etc*“ (this list is suggestive and non exhaustive so the group members are free to suggest changes to the same if any). 5. I suggest there should be a *link *to the page where the list of all ALSes already registered with APRALO is given, after the word “Sydney”. 6. To conclude the topic on what is APRALO we should add the following line: “*If you are a group/individual or body interested in more actively participating in ICANN decision making you can either find an ALS (already registered) which caters to our interest or region or alternatively form a new ALS and register the same with APRALO.* To find more log on to http://www.apralo.org..... ” Under the heading ‘APRALO diversity’: 7. What about other activities and working groups? 8. In the opening para I would like to suggest the insertion of the phrase “*Indian sub continent and*” before the phrase “Australasia in the south” Would be happy to discuss. Please confirm the receipt of this email. Regards, Nirmol K Agarwal Chair ISVK-India (www.jurisonline.in) On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 6:51 AM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia>wrote:
Hi All,
This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments.
Pavan
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Your recent emails have been delivered to [APAC-Discuss]. Haven't you seen copies of your own email back to you from the list? You can also find them in the list archive <http://atlarge-lists.icann.org/pipermail/apac-discuss_atlarge-lists.icann.or...> Adam At 4:41 PM +0530 6/11/10, nirmol agarwal wrote:
Dear Atlarge,
I have send the following mail to Pavan and to the group.
How can I confirm that the email has been received? This is urgent, since my do not want the comments to miss the printing. Regards, Nirmol Agarwal ISVK India ---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: nirmol agarwal <nirmolagarwal@gmail.com> Date: Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 1:26 PM Subject: Re: [APAC-Discuss] APRALO Brochure To: Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> Cc: APRALO <apac-discuss@atlarge-lists.icann.org>
Dear Pavan,
This indeed is a marvelous job.
However, I have some commnets on the same which are attached in a scanned copy. In case there is any difficulty with my writing I am also listing out the key comments below (for ease of reference the points below have the same numbering as given in the scanned copy):
Under the heading Did you Know that¹:
1. It is advisable to have the list of countries for ease of reference to the reader who is not aware about the APRALO jurisdiction.
2. ³?² typo error.
3. Instead of ³have² it should be ³can make² thus the revised line will read as follows:
³As a member of APRALO, you *can make* a direct impact on the directions of ²
Under the heading What is APRALO¹:
4. Where the reference to civil society has been made it should be explained through some examples and the following phrase should be added *³such as consumer rights group, legal bodies / professional groups, government nonprofit organizations etc*³ (this list is suggestive and non exhaustive so the group members are free to suggest changes to the same if any).
5. I suggest there should be a *link *to the page where the list of all ALSes already registered with APRALO is given, after the word ³Sydney².
6. To conclude the topic on what is APRALO we should add the following line:
³*If you are a group/individual or body interested in more actively participating in ICANN decision making you can either find an ALS (already registered) which caters to our interest or region or alternatively form a new ALS and register the same with APRALO.* To find more log on to http://www.apralo.org..... ²
Under the heading APRALO diversity¹:
7. What about other activities and working groups?
8. In the opening para I would like to suggest the insertion of the phrase ³*Indian sub continent and*² before the phrase ³Australasia in the south²
Would be happy to discuss.
Please confirm the receipt of this email.
Regards,
Nirmol K Agarwal
Chair ISVK-India (www.jurisonline.in)
On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 6:51 AM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia>wrote:
Hi All,
This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments.
Pavan
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The only contact information listed in this brochure is that of ICANN's offices: Brussels, 6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt. 5, B-1040 Brussels, BELGIUM, T +32 2 234 7870, F +32 2 234 7848 Los Angeles, 4676 Admiralty Way, Suite 330 Marina del Rey, CA 90292, USA, T +1 310 823 9358, F +1 310 823 8649 Washington, DC, 1101 New York Avenue NW, Suite 930 Washington, DC 20005, USA, T +1 202 570 7240, F +1 202 789 0104 Sydney, Level 2, 48 Hunter Street Sydney NSW 2000, AUSTRALIA, T +61 2 8236 7900, F +61 2 8236 7913 Someone inspired by the "Internet Needs you" message, wants to join at-Large or start an ALS will have to call the icann numbers ?? Apralo brochure needs apralo contact information, president and secretary's email and telephone contact info, list of ALSs with the email and phone numbers of ALS's. Sivasubramanian M On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 1:26 PM, nirmol agarwal <nirmolagarwal@gmail.com>wrote:
Dear Pavan,
This indeed is a marvelous job.
However, I have some commnets on the same which are attached in a scanned copy. In case there is any difficulty with my writing I am also listing out the key comments below (for ease of reference the points below have the same numbering as given in the scanned copy):
Under the heading ‘Did you Know that’:
1. It is advisable to have the list of countries for ease of reference to the reader who is not aware about the APRALO jurisdiction.
2. “?” typo error.
3. Instead of “have” it should be “can make” thus the revised line will read as follows:
“As a member of APRALO, you *can make* a direct impact on the directions of …”
Under the heading ‘What is APRALO’:
4. Where the reference to civil society has been made it should be explained through some examples and the following phrase should be added *“such as consumer rights group, legal bodies / professional groups, government nonprofit organizations etc*“ (this list is suggestive and non exhaustive so the group members are free to suggest changes to the same if any).
5. I suggest there should be a *link *to the page where the list of all ALSes already registered with APRALO is given, after the word “Sydney”.
6. To conclude the topic on what is APRALO we should add the following line:
“*If you are a group/individual or body interested in more actively participating in ICANN decision making you can either find an ALS (already registered) which caters to our interest or region or alternatively form a new ALS and register the same with APRALO.* To find more log on to http://www.apralo.org..... ”
Under the heading ‘APRALO diversity’:
7. What about other activities and working groups?
8. In the opening para I would like to suggest the insertion of the phrase “*Indian sub continent and*” before the phrase “Australasia in the south”
Would be happy to discuss.
Please confirm the receipt of this email.
Regards,
Nirmol K Agarwal
Chair ISVK-India (www.jurisonline.in)
On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 6:51 AM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> wrote:
Hi All,
This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments.
Pavan
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Dear Siva, Under "What is APRALO", the last paragraph provides the following e-mail address that Pavan receives: info@apralo.org. It is the Secretary's responsibility to forward any messages to the relevant ALS representatives. The limited amount of text that this brochure's format allows would not all for listing of all the names and contact details if all APRALO ALSes. Kind regards, Heidi -----Original Message----- From: apac-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org [mailto:apac-discuss-bounces@atlarge-lists.icann.org] On Behalf Of Sivasubramanian M Sent: Friday, June 11, 2010 4:20 AM To: nirmol agarwal Cc: APRALO Subject: Re: [APAC-Discuss] APRALO Brochure The only contact information listed in this brochure is that of ICANN's offices: Brussels, 6 Rond Point Schuman, Bt. 5, B-1040 Brussels, BELGIUM, T +32 2 234 7870, F +32 2 234 7848 Los Angeles, 4676 Admiralty Way, Suite 330 Marina del Rey, CA 90292, USA, T +1 310 823 9358, F +1 310 823 8649 Washington, DC, 1101 New York Avenue NW, Suite 930 Washington, DC 20005, USA, T +1 202 570 7240, F +1 202 789 0104 Sydney, Level 2, 48 Hunter Street Sydney NSW 2000, AUSTRALIA, T +61 2 8236 7900, F +61 2 8236 7913 Someone inspired by the "Internet Needs you" message, wants to join at-Large or start an ALS will have to call the icann numbers ?? Apralo brochure needs apralo contact information, president and secretary's email and telephone contact info, list of ALSs with the email and phone numbers of ALS's. Sivasubramanian M On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 1:26 PM, nirmol agarwal <nirmolagarwal@gmail.com>wrote:
Dear Pavan,
This indeed is a marvelous job.
However, I have some commnets on the same which are attached in a scanned copy. In case there is any difficulty with my writing I am also listing out the key comments below (for ease of reference the points below have the same numbering as given in the scanned copy):
Under the heading 'Did you Know that':
1. It is advisable to have the list of countries for ease of reference to the reader who is not aware about the APRALO jurisdiction.
2. "?" typo error.
3. Instead of "have" it should be "can make" thus the revised line will read as follows:
"As a member of APRALO, you *can make* a direct impact on the directions of ..."
Under the heading 'What is APRALO':
4. Where the reference to civil society has been made it should be explained through some examples and the following phrase should be added *"such as consumer rights group, legal bodies / professional groups, government nonprofit organizations etc*" (this list is suggestive and non exhaustive so the group members are free to suggest changes to the same if any).
5. I suggest there should be a *link *to the page where the list of all ALSes already registered with APRALO is given, after the word "Sydney".
6. To conclude the topic on what is APRALO we should add the following line:
"*If you are a group/individual or body interested in more actively participating in ICANN decision making you can either find an ALS (already registered) which caters to our interest or region or alternatively form a new ALS and register the same with APRALO.* To find more log on to http://www.apralo.org..... "
Under the heading 'APRALO diversity':
7. What about other activities and working groups?
8. In the opening para I would like to suggest the insertion of the phrase "*Indian sub continent and*" before the phrase "Australasia in the south"
Would be happy to discuss.
Please confirm the receipt of this email.
Regards,
Nirmol K Agarwal
Chair ISVK-India (www.jurisonline.in)
On Fri, Jun 11, 2010 at 6:51 AM, Pavan Budhrani <pavan@registry.asia> wrote:
Hi All,
This is the APRALO brochure final draft, any comments? If not, we will be sending it for printing for the Brussels event, Thanks, will wait until the end of the day today for comments.
Pavan
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