I took another whack. Other than fixing lots of typos, main changes are: - beginning clarifies that this is from the RAA WG - added the beneficiary language bullet from Bret - removed transfer timeout language, since it already does that - added a few words to acknowledge things ICANN already (at least in theory) does I didn't reinstate the WHOIS privacy stuff since I saw only one comment asking for it. But the section on resellers does say that registrars should have contracts that pass through all registrant responsibilities, which covers the most important point, I think. Regards, John Levine, johnl@iecc.com, Primary Perpetrator of "The Internet for Dummies", Information Superhighwayman wanna-be, http://www.johnlevine.com, ex-Mayor "More Wiener schnitzel, please", said Tom, revealingly.