Dear Olivier, I will certainly look into this this evening. If there are other comments and feedback, please feel free to send your views in today so I can make adjustments. Best Regards, Sala On Saturday, February 8, 2014, Olivier MJ Crepin-Leblond <ocl@gih.com> wrote:
Dear Sala,
I am reviewing the Statement & very much like its early sections but I have noticed a couple of things which probably need your attention:
- In the response to Q4, the first paragraph starts with "That" and this needs to be improved grammatically. In the second paragraph of the response to Q4 there is a sentence that needs cleaning up: "There are 2.6 billion internet users should indicate that there are at least sufficient persons in the world who could meet the criteria for selection." --> With 2.6 billion Internet users in the world, there should be enough people in the world who could meet the criteria for selection
- Answer to Q5: you mention that there are two points of view and I am not sure that this is the case. What I understood from Alejandro is that the TCRs should be cost neutral which in my understanding means some organisation has to pick up the costs, whether their firm or whether a third party. This might not be called "ICANN travel support", which is what effectively I understood Alejandro to object to but could definitely be some allocation that would make sure costs were paid by the TCR. Perhaps you might like to check this before affirming there's divergence.
I am also concerned that we are not quite answering the questions in Q5. The vote will launch on Monday 0:00 UTC - so thanks for looking into this during the week-end!
Kind regards,
Olivier
On 07/02/2014 21:47, Salanieta T. Tamanikaiwaimaro wrote:
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Dear Aida,
Message below:
On Sat, Feb 8, 2014 at 4:45 AM, Aida Noblia <aidanoblia@gmail.com<javascript:;>> wrote:
Dear Salanieta and All:
Regarding the amount of TCR: Of the 21 TRC only must attend each time, 6 or 8 people, half of which go to a place and half to another. From the point of view of those risks posed the biggest problem is that the two places where ceremonies are are located in the same country: if something in there is no other backup occurs. But that is no reason the query. Regards
That's a very excellent point. Whilst I had drafted in case of unforseeable circumstances, I can try to weave this in as well.
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