Hello, all. After discussing the issue with Alex Gakuru, we thought it a good idea to make this document available to a wide audience. It's an attachment, meant to be read in conjunction with the old consumer constituency charter (background and old charter here: http://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/public-comment-201002-en.htm#newco) The attached document points out sections of the old charter that need to be rewritten and separates them from the boilerplate legal language all the new constituency proposals have. We seek new wording that's appropriately inclusive. Some members of the community have asked for the opportunity to assist in the rewrite -- here is that opportunity. One way to proceed would be to respond to this list with proposed edits/rewrites, and Alex and I can incorporate them. Or perhaps staff could give us a workspace (or remind us of a suitable existing workspace) where edits can be suggested. We need to hear back as soon as possible, in the next week or so. Thanks in advance for your time. Beau Brendler Alex Gakuru