[atrt2] Edits post meeting of Friday the 13th.

Hi, I made my changes in the file indicated by staff on Friday. I took some of the Staff recommended language, but in some cases either left the original language or produced new language that tried to take concerns brought up by the Staff and community comment into account. I have not yet gone back and updated the template based sections based on community comments. After finishing the reading will go back and do that. avri