Larisa, Charla and Alice, Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much. Best, Brian
I thought that 6 pm EDT was the deadline for submitting comments!!!!!!!! I do not know what the wording "to continue performing functions normally done by paid professionals" in footnote 105 means. Alan At 11/10/2013 05:45 PM, Brian Cute wrote:
Larisa, Charla and Alice,
Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much.
Best, Brian
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I also thought I had a few more hours Have you seen my earlier mail to Paul Diaz? Carlos Raul *Carlos Raúl Gutiérrez* Skype carlos.raulg _________ Apartado 1571-1000 *COSTA RICA* On Fri, Oct 11, 2013 at 6:19 PM, Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>wrote:
I thought that 6 pm EDT was the deadline for submitting comments!!!!!!!!
I do not know what the wording "to continue performing functions normally done by paid professionals" in footnote 105 means.
Alan
At 11/10/2013 05:45 PM, Brian Cute wrote:
Larisa, Charla and Alice,
Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much.
Best, Brian
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Brian, I would like to confirm the next steps in regards to the Draft Report. As previously agreed and confirmed with you within the past 90 minutes, I've sent to Language Services the Executive Summary section of the report. Please see the attached document that will be translated into 5 UN languages plus Portuguese. The numbering system, formatting and other edits will take place on Monday 14 October. In light of the recent additional changes submitted by Olivier and Alan after your final draft, please send us a revised version of the report as soon as possible, so that we can begin the process of numbering, formatting, etc. The overall plan is as follows (same as outlined in my email to the coordination list on 9 October): * 21 October - open Public Comment Period - Draft Report in English; Executive Summary only in 5 UN languages + Portuguese. * 31 October- post full Draft Report translated into 5 UN languages + Portuguese. * 15 November - Translation of the ICC report into 5 UN languages. * 22 November - close Public Comment Period, which will allow for 21 days from the posting of the translated report and will get us past the BA meeting. * 13 December - close Reply Period. Best regards, Larisa From: Brian Cute [mailto:bcute@pir.org] Sent: Friday, October 11, 2013 2:45 PM To: Larisa B. Gurnick; Charla Shambley; Alice Jansen Cc: atrt2@icann.org (atrt2@icann.org) Subject: Final draft Report Larisa, Charla and Alice, Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much. Best, Brian
Larisa, Note that there is overlap between Recommendation 10 and "New" Recommendation 11. We need to correct this before translation of the Executive Summary is completed. I will call Alan to make an accurate correction as he is the author and will send the corrected version of the Executive Summary back to you. On another note, there are some edits that came in at the end of the day yesterday. Would I have time to incorporate those edits (in the body of the Report) this weekend and send that updated version of the Report to you. If the answer is "no," that is O.K. This is a draft and we will keep and incorporate edits received into the Final Report. Best, Brian From: Brian Cute <bcute@pir.org<mailto:bcute@pir.org>> Date: Fri, 11 Oct 2013 17:44:54 -0400 To: "Larisa B. Gurnick" <larisa.gurnick@icann.org<mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org>>, Charla Shambley <charla.shambley@icann.org<mailto:charla.shambley@icann.org>>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>> Cc: "atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org> (atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>)" <atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>> Subject: Final draft Report Larisa, Charla and Alice, Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much. Best, Brian
Brian, Re: executive summary, please use the document that I circulated to the Review Team last night and make your edits in redlined mode. I will highlight the changes for translators first thing on Monday. Re: full document, please include all the changes you wish and send us your revised draft by Monday. Staff will not take any further action on the Draft Report until then. Larisa Sent from my iPhone On Oct 12, 2013, at 5:57 AM, "Brian Cute" <bcute@pir.org<mailto:bcute@pir.org>> wrote: Larisa, Note that there is overlap between Recommendation 10 and "New" Recommendation 11. We need to correct this before translation of the Executive Summary is completed. I will call Alan to make an accurate correction as he is the author and will send the corrected version of the Executive Summary back to you. On another note, there are some edits that came in at the end of the day yesterday. Would I have time to incorporate those edits (in the body of the Report) this weekend and send that updated version of the Report to you. If the answer is "no," that is O.K. This is a draft and we will keep and incorporate edits received into the Final Report. Best, Brian From: Brian Cute <bcute@pir.org<mailto:bcute@pir.org>> Date: Fri, 11 Oct 2013 17:44:54 -0400 To: "Larisa B. Gurnick" <larisa.gurnick@icann.org<mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org>>, Charla Shambley <charla.shambley@icann.org<mailto:charla.shambley@icann.org>>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>> Cc: "atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org> (atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>)" <atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>> Subject: Final draft Report Larisa, Charla and Alice, Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much. Best, Brian
Thanks Larisa. Please consider the version you will receive from me no later than Sunday night to be "locked down." No further edits will be made. Best, Brian From: "Larisa B. Gurnick" <larisa.gurnick@icann.org<mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org>> Date: Sat, 12 Oct 2013 06:48:08 -0700 To: Brian Cute <bcute@pir.org<mailto:bcute@pir.org>> Cc: Charla Shambley <charla.shambley@icann.org<mailto:charla.shambley@icann.org>>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>>, "atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org> (atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>)" <atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>> Subject: Re: Final draft Report Brian, Re: executive summary, please use the document that I circulated to the Review Team last night and make your edits in redlined mode. I will highlight the changes for translators first thing on Monday. Re: full document, please include all the changes you wish and send us your revised draft by Monday. Staff will not take any further action on the Draft Report until then. Larisa Sent from my iPhone On Oct 12, 2013, at 5:57 AM, "Brian Cute" <bcute@pir.org<mailto:bcute@pir.org>> wrote: Larisa, Note that there is overlap between Recommendation 10 and "New" Recommendation 11. We need to correct this before translation of the Executive Summary is completed. I will call Alan to make an accurate correction as he is the author and will send the corrected version of the Executive Summary back to you. On another note, there are some edits that came in at the end of the day yesterday. Would I have time to incorporate those edits (in the body of the Report) this weekend and send that updated version of the Report to you. If the answer is "no," that is O.K. This is a draft and we will keep and incorporate edits received into the Final Report. Best, Brian From: Brian Cute <bcute@pir.org<mailto:bcute@pir.org>> Date: Fri, 11 Oct 2013 17:44:54 -0400 To: "Larisa B. Gurnick" <larisa.gurnick@icann.org<mailto:larisa.gurnick@icann.org>>, Charla Shambley <charla.shambley@icann.org<mailto:charla.shambley@icann.org>>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org<mailto:alice.jansen@icann.org>> Cc: "atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org> (atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>)" <atrt2@icann.org<mailto:atrt2@icann.org>> Subject: Final draft Report Larisa, Charla and Alice, Attached is the final draft version of the Report for publication. Please note: the numbering system in the document needs to be adjusted. My apologies but that was the last piece that I could not get to. Would you kindly be able to correct the numbering as it corresponds to the Table of Contents and the text in the body of the Report. Also, would you kindly copy into Appendix A the ICC Report and into Appendix B, Michael and Alan's WHOIS RT report. Once those pieces are copied in, the Report should be complete. Otherwise, should you see any glaring drafting errors or omissions in the Report (not substantive/analytical), please contact me to discuss. Thank you very much. Best, Brian
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