Hi Niels, Great job - also looks fantastic to me! While I echo Vidushi's and Corinne's concerns, I think it might be useful then to have two different visualizations. To keep one like this (cause it is indeed super nice!) which is more minimalist - because I think its also useful for people who have a bit of knowledge on ICANN/IG; and another one with more context. In my view this would be optimal, and also would allow us to have this very wavy nice visual! Best wishes, Monika On Mon, May 9, 2016 at 7:18 PM, Niels ten Oever <niels@article19.org> wrote:
Thanks for your input Corinne and Vidushi! I just sent your comments back to the designer. I would like to give her a bit of creative freedom and she what she does with your comments, I like it that someone who is new to the processes tries to make sense of it. Let's see what the next iteration is, if we don;t like it we'll start adding text.
Am a bit afraid though it might become too text heavy, eventhough Corinne's example was rly nice.
Cheers,
~n.,
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On 05/09/2016 11:25 AM, vidushi@cis-india.org wrote:
Dear Niels,
Thanks so much for this! The visualisation looks great to me, it does a fantastic job of lending structure to different ICANN processes. I like the horizontal flow!
I had a couple of thoughts that I think could be useful in developing the next iteration:
1. As we are aiming this work at newcomers, we could add some brief context/make the connection of each right and why ICANN must be involved; 2. I do agree with Corinne on the point of adding some background info about ICANN somewhere in the visualisation. This would make it easier for newcomers to add context to each right.
Cheers,
Vidushi
----- On May 8, 2016, at 6:16 PM, Corinne Cath <cattekwaad@gmail.com> wrote:
Hi niels,
Thanks for organizing all of this! The table is very nice. It is clean and concise. The only thing I worry about is that is still a lot of text and a little bland. I think it would be great if this dendrogram would be part of a larger visualization that also gives more background info about ICANN (beyond a glossary, which also seems very useful).
I am adding a link to a visualization <http://visual.ly/funding-final-frontier>made about the budget of NASA that I think does a good job at combining text with themed graphics, while not losing the ability to communicate the information.
Great first stab and look forward to seeing the next iteration.
Best,
Corinne
On Fri, May 6, 2016 at 12:25 PM, Niels ten Oever <niels@article19.org <mailto:niels@article19.org>> wrote:
Hi all,
After talking through all the details of human rights and ICANN policy with a designer she has taken a first stab at vizualizing the table.
Let me know what you all think and whether you like the direction in which she is thinking.
Suggestions, questions, remarks are very welcome.
All the best,
Niels
-------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: Re: slide10 Date: Fri, 6 May 2016 12:55:12 +0200 From: Giulia De Amicis <giulia.dmcs@gmail.com <mailto:giulia.dmcs@gmail.com>> To: Niels ten Oever <niels@article19.org <mailto:niels@article19.org>>
Dear Niels,
as promised, I'm sharing with you a first draft of the poster. This is what I thought and came out with:
I see the structure of the information as a dendrogram. We have in fact different levels of information, with specific contents for each point. I still have to figure out how to include specific contents of a subtopic ("Rights protection mechanism", in "freedom of expression), which includes more specifics at a first level. I see it as another layer, distinct from the others, maybe you can help me with this. Overall, I think it will look good also in a vertical flow. We can discuss this together, according to the final output.
I have an idea in order to make the contents more understandable for a general, non specific public (as me). As there is a lot of space that we can use in the infographic, perhaps we could built a glossary which will explain the acronyms used (and maybe a short description of each one). This will help to create a basic background and get people more familiar with the topic.
I look forward to hear your feedbacks and comments,
Best regards!
Giulia
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