Dear Chris, Thank you for your elaboration. Let me raise some comments a) page 2 - line 20 I'd like to propose adding Some claim the need to know more clearly the way how they can demonstrate the community support, while they agree to the necessity of such demonstration. as the third bullet point in "Community Support" section. The first and second bullet points argue about the necessity of the support or demonstration of such support. The proposed bullet point intends to argue about the way how to demonstrate. b) in general For example. there is an article about Bulgarian request. http://domainincite.com/icann-rejects-bulgarian-idn-info-request/ Assuming this is true, I propose adding a sentence like Investigation on to what extent and how ICANN should give feedback to the proposer or community about the reasons in case of objection. somewhere - maybe in "Objection/re-evaluation rights" section. c) typos and editorials c1) page 2 - line 3 Community Support ==> Community support other section headers have Capital letters only at the top of the first word such as "IDN tables" and "Confusingly similar string" c2) page 3 - line 3 although there is some cases has been demonstrated ==> although there are some cases that have been demonstrated editorial c3) page 3 - line 12 eitherr ==> either typo Regards, Hiro On Tue, 11 Jan 2011 08:49:32 +1100 (EST) "Chris Disspain" <ceo@auda.org.au> wrote:
All,
A draft of these is attached. The comments are straight forward and should not be contentious since they all state that the status quo of the fast track should be maintained.
Does anyone object if I post these at the end of the week?
Cheers,
Chris Disspain | Chief Executive Officer
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