Nov. 23, 2019
2:40 p.m.
Two small suggestions: RE Page 11: For Table: Division of Responsibilities - Mechanisms A, B, and C. In the Table, for Mechanism B “Score successful and unsuccessful applicants”, would not better wording simply be “Independent Panel, jointly convened”, rather than “Depends on Division of Responsibility”? RE: Page 14: “ICANN Monitoring and Evaluation” reads “If part or all of the mechanism is external, ICANN should have an established process for monitoring and evaluating…”. Since this should be true for the mechanism whether it is external or internal, could this simply say: “The mechanism should have an established process for monitoring and evaluating…”? Sam L.