Hi Erika and Anne, Thanks for the question. The text in this section quotes directly the response that ICANN org sent the CCWG in response to the CCWG’s question about the relative costs of mechanisms A and C (see: https://community.icann.org/display/CWGONGAP/Additional+Questions+and+Respon...). It quoted without omitting any text so that readers can see the full context. Would it address the issue to add a footnote stating that if mechanism C is ultimately selected, the CCWG anticipates that the implementation will look like scenario C1 and not C2? Kind regards, Emily From: Erika Mann <erika@erikamann.com> Date: Saturday, 23 November 2019 at 09:21 To: "Aikman-Scalese, Anne" <AAikman@lrrc.com> Cc: Emily Barabas <emily.barabas@icann.org>, "ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org" <ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Revised Proposed Final Report and Indicative Poll on Mechanisms - Deadline 3 December 2019 Anne - if there are remaining inconsistencies, we will certainly review them and change them before we publish the second PC. I reviewed the text completely and I must admit I did not notice this particular inconsistency. Maybe it relates to a direct quote(s) and in these case we decided to keep the original quote. If this is the case, we can certainly add a footnote. Kind regards, Erika Sent from my iPhone On Nov 22, 2019, at 10:30 PM, Aikman-Scalese, Anne <AAikman@lrrc.com<mailto:AAikman@lrrc.com>> wrote: Thanks Emily. As an initial question re the revisions, I don’t know why we still have text related to Board advice on “Scenario C2” if that scenario is equivalent to Mechanism D which has been rejected by the CCWG. All of the language relative to Scenario C2 reprinted from the Board advice, as previously commented, is just confusing to the public. Could someone please clarify? Thank you, Anne From: Ccwg-auctionproceeds <ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org<mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org>> On Behalf Of Emily Barabas Sent: Friday, November 22, 2019 7:05 AM To: ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org<mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> Subject: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Revised Proposed Final Report and Indicative Poll on Mechanisms - Deadline 3 December 2019 [EXTERNAL] ________________________________ Dear all, Please find attached the latest revision of the proposed Final Report. This version incorporates input received over the mailing list since 8 November. It also includes some suggested edits from the leadership team intended to improve clarity and consistency of the text in certain sections. If you have concerns about any of the suggested edits, please respond on the mailing list by Tuesday 3 December. As agreed by the CCWG during the face-to-face session at ICANN66, the next step is to open the indicative poll on possible mechanisms for allocation of auction proceeds. You can access the poll here: http://input.icann.org/go?iv=1db40f7xlo0xj [input.icann.org]<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__input.icann.org_go-3Fiv-...>. Members and participants are both encouraged to complete the poll. As a reminder, it is not necessary to consult with your groups to respond to this poll. You can respond from your own perspective based on the CCWG discussions to date and your own analysis. The results of the indicative poll will be used to finalize content on the recommended mechanism(s) in the proposed Final Report. 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