For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan
Dear All, Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations. Best regards, Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...>.
Dear Marika, Thank you for the follow-up I did some editing to the letter as the following: -for phase 1. Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary” -for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets. (as organized per phase 1.); put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue). -for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and” Attached is the document with my suggested edits. Best wishes, Nadira On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> wrote:
Dear All,
Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations.
Best regards,
Marika
*Marika Konings*
*Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) *
*Email: marika.konings@icann.org <marika.konings@icann.org> *
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Thanks Nadira .. I’m fine with either “initial” or “preliminary”, but would suggest that we use the same word in both the introductory paragraph and bullet point 1., for consistency and for readers to understand that we are referencing the same thing .. Kind Regards --Manal From: ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Nadira Alaraj Sent: Monday, May 29, 2017 5:50 PM To: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Cc: ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org Subject: Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan Dear Marika, Thank you for the follow-up I did some editing to the letter as the following: -for phase 1. Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary” -for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets. (as organized per phase 1.); put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue). -for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and” Attached is the document with my suggested edits. Best wishes, Nadira On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> wrote: Dear All, Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations. Best regards, Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...>. _______________________________________________ Ccwg-auctionproceeds mailing list Ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org<mailto:Ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ccwg-auctionproceeds --
Thank you Manal, It is okay with me, I was just trying to avoid the repetition of the word "initial" in the paragraph of phase 1. On May 30, 2017 10:52 AM, "Manal Ismail" <manal@tra.gov.eg> wrote: Thanks Nadira .. I’m fine with either “initial” or “preliminary”, but would suggest that we use the same word in both the introductory paragraph and bullet point 1., for consistency and for readers to understand that we are referencing the same thing .. Kind Regards --Manal *From:* ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org [mailto: ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org] *On Behalf Of *Nadira Alaraj *Sent:* Monday, May 29, 2017 5:50 PM *To:* Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> *Cc:* ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org *Subject:* Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan Dear Marika, Thank you for the follow-up I did some editing to the letter as the following: -for phase 1. Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary” -for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets. (as organized per phase 1.); put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue). -for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and” Attached is the document with my suggested edits. Best wishes, Nadira On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> wrote: Dear All, Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations. Best regards, Marika *Marika Konings* *Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) * *Email: marika.konings@icann.org <marika.konings@icann.org> * *Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO* *Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses <http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages <http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...>. * _______________________________________________ Ccwg-auctionproceeds mailing list Ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ccwg-auctionproceeds -- fine
Many thanks Nadira for the clarification .. I see your point but just felt that consistency may be important for first-time readers .. Kind Regards --Manal From: Nadira Alaraj [mailto:nadira.araj@gmail.com] Sent: Tuesday, May 30, 2017 10:26 AM To: Manal Ismail <manal@tra.gov.eg> Cc: ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org; Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Subject: RE: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan Thank you Manal, It is okay with me, I was just trying to avoid the repetition of the word "initial" in the paragraph of phase 1. On May 30, 2017 10:52 AM, "Manal Ismail" <manal@tra.gov.eg<mailto:manal@tra.gov.eg>> wrote: Thanks Nadira .. I’m fine with either “initial” or “preliminary”, but would suggest that we use the same word in both the introductory paragraph and bullet point 1., for consistency and for readers to understand that we are referencing the same thing .. Kind Regards --Manal From: ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org<mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org<mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org>] On Behalf Of Nadira Alaraj Sent: Monday, May 29, 2017 5:50 PM To: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> Cc: ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org<mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan Dear Marika, Thank you for the follow-up I did some editing to the letter as the following: -for phase 1. Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary” -for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets. (as organized per phase 1.); put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue). -for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and” Attached is the document with my suggested edits. Best wishes, Nadira On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> wrote: Dear All, Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations. Best regards, Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...>. _______________________________________________ Ccwg-auctionproceeds mailing list Ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org<mailto:Ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ccwg-auctionproceeds -- fine
Many thanks Marika for capably accommodating all comments .. Kind Regards --Manal From: ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org [mailto:ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Marika Konings Sent: Monday, May 29, 2017 4:43 PM To: ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org Subject: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan Dear All, Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations. Best regards, Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...>.
Thanks Marika. I have reviewed the changes proposed by Nadira and Manal on their follow-up messages, and I do not have any objections to proceed with the letter. Greatly appreciate your time and effort to communicate the agreed phases and milestones to the chartering organizations. Warm regards, Sylvia ———— Sylvia Cadena | sylvia@apnic.net<mailto:sylvia@apnic.net> | APNIC Foundation - Head of Programs | +10 GMT Brisbane, Australia | http://www.apnic.foundation From: <ccwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Date: Tuesday, 30 May 2017 at 12:42 am To: "ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org" <ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> Subject: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - updated letter to chartering organizations re. work plan Dear All, Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations. Best regards, Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...>.
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Manal Ismail -
Marika Konings -
Nadira Alaraj -
Sylvia Cadena