All, I had sent this directly to the drafting team but at Jonathan's suggestion, I now send them to the full Council. Cheers, Berard --------- Original Message --------- Subject: BC edits to the current proposed GNSO Council response to the call for Public Comment - ICANN Strategy Panels Draft Report From: john@crediblecontext.com Date: 4/22/14 7:13 am To: jrobinson@afilias.info, "Thomas Rickert" <rickert@anwaelte.de> Cc: "Gabriela Szlak" <gabrielaszlak@gmail.com> Jonathan, Thomas: At this point, the BC has confirmed is opposition to offering a comment as a matter of policy, but has little quarrel with the thrust of the comment. With this in mind, I offer the attached which redlines some of the language that can help make the point even as it reinforces the policy role of the Council. Cheers, Berard