Hi all, In light of our discussion during last week's Council meeting, I am proposing some minor edits. In addition, Berry has also kindly made some suggested edits. Please find attached an updated version for your review and input. Hi Tom & Carlton - I note you both have expressed support for the draft posted by Rafik last week so I apologize for sending this updated version at this time. I hope you will find the latest edits are non-material or should not be controversial. Per the email reminder from Nathalie, the deadline for input is 28 May 2020. Kind regards, Pam ------------------------------------------------------------------ Sender:Rafik Dammak <rafik.dammak@gmail.com> Sent At:2020 May 22 (Fri.) 06:52 Recipient:council@gnso.icann.org <council@gnso.icann.org> Subject:[council] New version of Draft GNSO Council Response to 11 March ICANN Board Letter on Rec 7 and Thick WHOIS Hi all, please find a new version of the draft GNSO council response to Board letter regarding recommendation #7 which was discussed by members of the small drafting team. Best, Rafik