Thank you very much for the review, Justine! The updates have been made and will appear on the final document to be published on the 30th April 2022. Kind regards, Nathalie From: Justine Chew <justine.chew.icann@gmail.com> Date: Friday, 22 April 2022 at 03:28 To: Nathalie Peregrine <nathalie.peregrine@icann.org> Cc: "council@gnso.icann.org" <council@gnso.icann.org>, "gnso-secs@icann.org" <gnso-secs@icann.org> Subject: [Ext] Re: [council] Draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting 14 April 2022 Hello Nathalie, Thank you for these draft minutes and please find following my comments on the same. Re: item 4 on SSAD ODA 1. Pg 3, 1st para, line 3: "The small team found a number of accuracies and errors of interpretation." - shouldn't "accuracies" be "inaccuracies"? 2. Pg 3, last para, line 2: "SAD" should be "SSAD" Re: item 5 on DNS Abuse 3. Pg 5, the largest para: there are a bunch of misplaced or redundant commas which I will leave you to review/correct, but more importantly, the last sentence, I doubt that Paul McGrady "added that the aim will be to direct the GNSO Council on next steps", but rather that the small team would inform or propose to Council the appropriate next steps. Re: item 5 on Closed Generics 4. Pg 6, 3rd para, line 5: the sentence, "The NCSG also doesn’t believe that closed generics is a GAC specific issue and disapproves of the advantage the GAC is benefitting from." seems incomplete. Perhaps add the words "this dialogue" after the word"from"? Kind regards, Justine On Wed, 20 Apr 2022 at 15:35, Nathalie Peregrine via council <council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org>> wrote: Dear Councilors, Attached, please find the draft minutes of the GNSO Council meeting held on Thursday, 14 April 2022. If there are no comments, these minutes will be published on the website as approved, according to the GNSO Rules of Procedure <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__gnso.icann.org_en_counc...> section 3.5 "If no objections are received within 10 days, the minutes will be deemed to have been approved for posting" on 30 April 2022. Thank you. Kind Regards, Nathalie _______________________________________________ council mailing list council@gnso.icann.org<mailto:council@gnso.icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/council _______________________________________________ By submitting your personal data, you consent to the processing of your personal data for purposes of subscribing to this mailing list accordance with the ICANN Privacy Policy (https://www.icann.org/privacy/policy) and the website Terms of Service (https://www.icann.org/privacy/tos). You can visit the Mailman link above to change your membership status or configuration, including unsubscribing, setting digest-style delivery or disabling delivery altogether (e.g., for a vacation), and so on.