I second this motion with the friendly amendments. Susan Kawaguchi Domain Name Manager Facebook Legal Dept. On 6/28/16, 11:29 PM, "owner-council@gnso.icann.org on behalf of Paul McGrady" <owner-council@gnso.icann.org on behalf of policy@paulmcgrady.com> wrote:
Avri,
Thank you for this very friendly amendment! I appreciate your help improving this motion.
Best, Paul
-----Original Message----- From: owner-council@gnso.icann.org [mailto:owner-council@gnso.icann.org] On Behalf Of avri doria Sent: Tuesday, June 28, 2016 10:46 PM To: council@gnso.icann.org Subject: Re: [council] Revised Motion on Drafting Team/Empowerment
Hi,
In terms of the changes, I find it problematic that is still refers solely to modifying bylaws. I think most of the work will involve modifying operating procedures and thus the council should consider the following ammendment:
2. The Drafting Team shall comprise those volunteers from the GNSO community which are identified by their Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups who express interests and can demonstrate reasonable knowledge of or experience with the process of revising the ICANN Bylaws. Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups are requested to identify volunteers by letter to the GNSCO Council Chair by 22 July 2016.
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2. The Drafting Team shall comprise those volunteers from the GNSO community which are identified by their Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups who express interests and can demonstrate reasonable knowledge of or experience with the process of revising the ICANN Bylaws _or GNSO operating procedures_. Constituencies and Stakeholder Groups are requested to identify volunteers by letter to the GNSCO Council Chair by 22 July 2016.
avri
On 29-Jun-16 00:00, Paul McGrady wrote:
Hi All,
Attached is a revised version (with track changes) of my motion which we discussed on Monday. Thank you all for your input into improving this. I look forward to discussing the revised version with you all soon.
Best,
Paul
Paul McGrady
policy@paulmcgrady.com <mailto:policy@paulmcgrady.com>
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