Thanks, Darcy - you highlighted the few edits I had, and I have only one minor grammatical addition at the bottom of page 1. Jeff's input pick up on numerous comments that were made in January. In my view, communication between the PDPs and Council is the most critical aspect of the role of liaison, and Jeff's suggested amendments seem very much aimed at making more explicit that communications function. I suspect that as Council we're thinking most closely about what the liaison does in linking Council to a PDP WG (natural, given that it's *Council's *liaison *to the PDP*) but there is good reason to think about what the liaison can do the other direction (linking PDP WG to Council). Best wishes, Heather On Tue, Feb 13, 2018 at 4:05 AM, Darcy Southwell < darcy.southwell@endurance.com> wrote:

Thanks, Marika. I made a few minor edits related to spelling/punctuation. I think your changes reflect the discussions we had and better clarify the liaison role.

Darcy

*From: *council <council-bounces@gnso.icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> *Date: *Monday, February 12, 2018 at 5:53 AM *To: *"council@gnso.icann.org" <council@gnso.icann.org> *Subject: *[council] Revised GNSO Liaison to WGs role description

Dear All,

Following the discussions during the Council Strategic Planning Session in Los Angeles, please find attached an updated version of the GNSO Liaison to WGs role description for your review and consideration. The proposed changes in redline format aim to address the comments and suggestions made during the meeting. Please share any further comments and/or edits you may have with the mailing list.

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Marika

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