Thanks to Justine for correcting a number of typos. A revised version is attached. HOWEVER, I just checked the submission procedure and apparently comments are limited to 4000 characters, so this will need to be significantly reduced. Also, apparently the deadline is not next Monday, but next Thursday, so we have a bit more time. Alan At 2021-03-10 12:27 AM, Alan Greenberg wrote:
Attached is the draft ALAC comment on the EC NIS2 Proposal.
It is also posted on the Wiki at https://community.icann.org/x/zINeCQ, and I have created a Google Doc as well (https://docs.google.com/document/d/16oJtYMv1mjKQpvL_H_LmOYdKRmxerEF66L4Gc5AL...). In the Google Doc please limit yourself to COMMENTS and not suggested edits to. Comments via e-mail also welcome, but please prefix any comment SUBJECT line with NIS2 to ensure I don't miss it.
I will be discussing it on today's CPWG call.
The deadline for submission to the European Commission is next Monday, 15 March. Accordingly my intent is to finalize this tomorrow (Thursday) for consideration of the ALAC (subject to final editing).
Maureen will let the ALAC know the details of how they will consider it.
Alan