?Thank you Marita, well noted. I will attach the presentation to the ALAC Monthly and CPWG meeting agendas this week. ________________________________ From: Marita Moll <mmoll@ca.inter.net> Sent: Tuesday, April 28, 2020 1:34 PM To: Evin Erdogdu; cpwg@icann.org Cc: Greg Shatan; ICANN At-Large Staff Subject: [Ext] Re: Drafting Team Presentation: Phase 1 Initial Report of the Review of All Rights Protection Mechanisms in All gTLDs Policy Development Process Thanks Evin. I have reviewed it now and only made some minor comments and sent them to Greg. Thanks Greg for this work. Marita On 4/28/2020 8:46 AM, Evin Erdogdu wrote: Dear CPWG Members, Please see the attached draft At-Large RPM recommendations with regards to the ICANN Public Comment on Phase 1 Initial Report of the Review of All Rights Protection Mechanisms in All gTLDs Policy Development Process<https://community.icann.org/display/alacpolicydev/At-Large+Workspace%3A+Phas...>. Kindly note that this draft was created by Greg Shatan, and Marita Moll has not yet reviewed - it is intended to be open for discussion and change. ? Best, Evin

Nice work Greg. I particularly like the cheeky opening multiple choice questionnaire slide:-D Maybe we can focus on the few outstanding items in red on the call today -- unless people have issues with other responses. Marita On 4/28/2020 9:25 PM, Greg Shatan wrote:

All,

I have attached a slightly revised presentation reflecting comments from Marita, on Recommendation 6 (slide 7), Question 185 (slide 25), Question 188 (slide 26), and Question 189 (slide 26).  I've tried to highlight these in red for visibility.

To support our branding (and to avoid confusion), the revised version has the At Large logo on the cover page (in the little box).

I look forward to your feedback.

Best regards,

Greg -------------------------------------------------------------------- *Greg Shatan | President, ISOC-NY* greg@isoc-ny.org <mailto:greg@isoc-ny.org>

/"The Internet is for everyone"/

On Tue, Apr 28, 2020 at 8:46 AM Evin Erdogdu <evin.erdogdu@icann.org <mailto:evin.erdogdu@icann.org>> wrote:

Dear CPWG Members,

Please see the attached draft At-Large RPM recommendations with regards to the ICANN Public Comment on Phase 1 Initial Report of the Review of All Rights Protection Mechanisms in All gTLDs Policy Development Process <https://community.icann.org/display/alacpolicydev/At-Large+Workspace%3A+Phas...>.

Kindly note that this draft was created by Greg Shatan, and Marita Moll has not yet reviewed - it is intended to be open for discussion and change. ​

Best,

Evin