Straw man presentation
Dear all, Please find included the intitial draft for the RT presentations in Barcelona. I have drafted it on the basis of Phillipe’s example, the template document and using latest version of Debbie’s document. Please note that: CSC has appointed Elain Pruis as its liaison and PTI has appointed Kim Davies as its liaison. We are awaiting appointment of the ICANN Org liaison. For the time being I have included Trang and Amy Creamer in cc. Kind regards, Bart
Thank you, Bart! We will review and provide input by Monday. Best, Trang From: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> Date: Friday, October 12, 2018 at 4:41 AM To: "CSC-effectivenessrt@icann.org" <CSC-effectivenessrt@icann.org> Cc: Trang Nguyen <trang.nguyen@icann.org>, Amy Creamer <amy.creamer@icann.org> Subject: Straw man presentation Dear all, Please find included the intitial draft for the RT presentations in Barcelona. I have drafted it on the basis of Phillipe’s example, the template document and using latest version of Debbie’s document. Please note that: CSC has appointed Elain Pruis as its liaison and PTI has appointed Kim Davies as its liaison. We are awaiting appointment of the ICANN Org liaison. For the time being I have included Trang and Amy Creamer in cc. Kind regards, Bart
Bart, why do we need liaisons from ICANN .org and PTI? Sent from my iPhone On Oct 12, 2018, at 1:44 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> wrote: Dear all, Please find included the intitial draft for the RT presentations in Barcelona. I have drafted it on the basis of Phillipe’s example, the template document and using latest version of Debbie’s document. Please note that: CSC has appointed Elain Pruis as its liaison and PTI has appointed Kim Davies as its liaison. We are awaiting appointment of the ICANN Org liaison. For the time being I have included Trang and Amy Creamer in cc. Kind regards, Bart <CSC Effectiveness Review Presentation.pptx> _______________________________________________ CSC-EffectivenessRT mailing list CSC-EffectivenessRT@icann.org<mailto:CSC-EffectivenessRT@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-effectivenessrt
Thanks Bart I think this looks good. On slide three you have: Review is to be light-weight without and short term, building on results of CSC Charter Review. I think you can remove the word ‘without’. Donna Sent from my iPhone On Oct 12, 2018, at 1:44 PM, Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> wrote: Dear all, Please find included the intitial draft for the RT presentations in Barcelona. I have drafted it on the basis of Phillipe’s example, the template document and using latest version of Debbie’s document. Please note that: CSC has appointed Elain Pruis as its liaison and PTI has appointed Kim Davies as its liaison. We are awaiting appointment of the ICANN Org liaison. For the time being I have included Trang and Amy Creamer in cc. Kind regards, Bart <CSC Effectiveness Review Presentation.pptx> _______________________________________________ CSC-EffectivenessRT mailing list CSC-EffectivenessRT@icann.org<mailto:CSC-EffectivenessRT@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-effectivenessrt
Bart, Thanks for this. I think that’s good, noted a typo on slide two bullet point two (“without”?) there’s probably a word missing there, and a couple of others: Slide 3: “taks” and Slide 9 “Prepratory” Regards, Philippe From: CSC-EffectivenessRT [mailto:csc-effectivenessrt-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Friday, October 12, 2018 1:41 PM To: CSC-effectivenessrt@icann.org Cc: Amy Creamer; Trang Nguyen Subject: [CSC-EffectivenessRT] Straw man presentation Dear all, Please find included the intitial draft for the RT presentations in Barcelona. I have drafted it on the basis of Phillipe’s example, the template document and using latest version of Debbie’s document. Please note that: CSC has appointed Elain Pruis as its liaison and PTI has appointed Kim Davies as its liaison. We are awaiting appointment of the ICANN Org liaison. For the time being I have included Trang and Amy Creamer in cc. Kind regards, Bart _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you.
participants (4)
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Austin, Donna -
Bart Boswinkel -
philippe.fouquart@orange.com -
Trang Nguyen