All I think this needs a bit more work, but this is where I am for now. Donna From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Martin Boyle via CSC-Review Sent: Friday, February 09, 2018 12:53 PM To: 'Maria Otanes' <maria.otanes@icann.org>; CSC-review@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] CSC RT updated docs I realise that this is too late for the deadline and (given the time and Donna’s imminent absence) I’m not expecting this to be picked up in time for the meeting with the CSC, but I thought it would be worth finishing a read through of the text and suggesting revisions for the next round. A marked-up copy is attached. Best Martin From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: 06 February 2018 19:43 To: CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: [CSC-Review] CSC RT updated docs Hello CSC Review team, As discussed, please find updated docs attached. AC recording: https://participate.icann.org/p9lyoz1xy2j/<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__participate.icann.org_p9lyoz1xy2j_-3FOWASP-5FCSRFTOKEN-3D8fc924fa62adb86d03cca002bd3a06cd5b515dbb8c3fb918387f48e272e828a7&d=DwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=CwipU91YB6EkpFXK9ynnT_QUef4yC5p7jpsDm8cU97g&m=nU7Tvz2rL7dzTuciy2YAmSuuD4jaEe4dBYYk8y_wADk&s=NQQSVSm07vlYQ3bVBTkXHxVq87mpaA1Uj1KbyW7-S5E&e=> Best, Ria