All I’ve added my comments to this doc as well, prefacing with DA and using a different colour. I also added MB in front of Martin’s comments to avoid confusion. Donna From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Elaine Pruis Sent: Tuesday, January 23, 2018 8:21 AM To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org> Cc: CSC-review@icann.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] FW: Overview of proposed changes Hello Please find attached the document with my comments, limited to responses to the concerns of the RT for items # 11 and 13. I'm fine with the rest of the items. Thanks Elaine On Mon, Jan 22, 2018 at 4:15 PM, Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org<mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org>> wrote: Hello CSC Review Team, Friendly reminder, please provide your feedback and comments by EOD tomorrow, 23 January 2018. Martin’s version is attached. Thanks, Ria From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org<mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Martin Boyle via CSC-Review <CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Reply-To: Martin Boyle <martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com<mailto:martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com>> Date: Sunday, January 21, 2018 at 1:58 PM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>>, "CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>" <CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] Overview of proposed changes Thanks Bart, I have annotated the proposed changes as requested: nothing major, but there are a few points where we need to poll to see if there is any agreement with my interpretation! I’ve put in comments to (try to) help you interpret my assessments. Hope this helps Martin From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org<mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: 19 January 2018 10:28 To: CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: [CSC-Review] Overview of proposed changes Dear all, Please find included the amended document of proposed changes (version 02). It now includes: * All proposals/comments are numbered (1-24) * the 2nd column an indication of the proposer ( CSC or RT) * The 3rd column to be used to mark as agreed (green), further discussion needed (amber), not supported (red) * Added 7th column which you can use for your comments. Please provide your feed-back and comments by Tuesday 23 January. As said the overview of proposals is a combination of the changes proposed by the CSC following their internal review of the charter, and the proposals/comments from the RT, as included in the annotated charter. For your reference, I have included the latest version of the annotated charter, Kind regards, Bart _______________________________________________ CSC-Review mailing list CSC-Review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-Review@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/csc-review<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__mm.icann.org_mailman_listinfo_csc-2Dreview&d=DwMFaQ&c=MOptNlVtIETeDALC_lULrw&r=CwipU91YB6EkpFXK9ynnT_QUef4yC5p7jpsDm8cU97g&m=2_u48ekYhOn-t3BTECItAhA5m7QYTCV7DufcaoA58ew&s=l7tNzlF5MwJsW_bGVW-Fj-XOIlG_zp0YB4vd6tipDxo&e=>