All Martin, Bart and I have kicked around some of the items on the slides and attached is the version we will use for our discussion with the CSC tomorrow. Thanks Donna From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Austin, Donna via CSC-Review Sent: Monday, December 11, 2017 2:35 PM To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>; Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>; CSC-review@icann.org Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] [EXTERNAL] Re: CSC Charter Review Team draft update slides Ria, all I’ve done some work on the doc. Unfortunately, I don’t know how to track changes on PPT so they’re not easy to notice. I do have a question on slide 7. Bart or Ria could you clarify for me what this means. It could use a bit more refinement, but I think it’s in pretty good shape. Thanks Donna From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: Monday, December 11, 2017 11:45 AM To: Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>>; CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Charter Review Team draft update slides Hello CSC Review Team, Friendly reminder, could you please provide feedback/update the slides attached at your earliest convenience? We’d like to circulate to the CSC tomorrow, if possible. Thanks so much, Ria From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org<mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org>> on behalf of Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org<mailto:bart.boswinkel@icann.org>> Date: Friday, December 8, 2017 at 6:56 AM To: "CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>" <CSC-review@icann.org<mailto:CSC-review@icann.org>> Subject: [CSC-Review] CSC Charter Review Team draft update slides Dear all, Per our call yesterday, please find included a draft update of slide deck you used in Abu Dhabi. Based on conversation yesterday I have updated the topic list (slide 6) and included a slide per identified topic included one slide detailing the comments/observations to date (slide 7-14). I suggest that you update the slides by Monday 11 December COB Pacific time. Also suggest to use the topic list (slide 6) as agenda for the upcoming conversation with CSC. Kind regards, Bart ---------- Timeline for next steps Who ? What? When to be completed? Abdala, Keith provide comments on charter 20 November Donna provide high level description of issues 21 November Bart description of process, ToR and basic info 22 November Martin Check description Donna 23 November Bart Detail high level issues identified using comments document 24 November Donna, Bart Prepare draft initial CSC report 1 December Donna, Abdala Consolidate changes to charter 1 December Martin, Keith Comment initial draft CSC review team report 6 December CSC review team Discuss report and 7 December Bart Consolidate proposed changes 8 December (by 17.00 UTC) Donna Finalise report ad send draft to CSC 8 December CSC review team Meeting with CSC to discuss draft findings 14 December 20.00 UTC