Dear all, Please find included the latest version of the consolidated comments on the CSC charter, including Martin’s additional comments @ Keith: could you be so kind to look at document? Kind regards, Bart From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Martin Boyle via CSC-Review <CSC-review@icann.org> Reply-To: Martin Boyle <martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com> Date: Friday 24 November 2017 at 01:06 To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org>, "CSC-review@icann.org" <CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November I think that item 4 was for me to comment on Donna’s comments: just missed completing the attached in time! From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: 17 November 2017 17:34 To: CSC-review@icann.org Subject: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November Dear CSC Review Team, Attached, please find notes from yesterday’s call. Next Steps can be found below. Have a wonderful weekend, Ria ---------- Timeline for next steps Who ?What?When to be completed? Abdala, Keithprovide comments on charter20 November Donnaprovide high level description of issues21 November Bartdescription of process, ToR and basic info22 November MartinCheck description Donna23 November BartDetail high level issues identified using comments document24 November Donna, Bart Prepare draft initial CSC report 1 December Donna, AbdalaConsolidate changes to charter1 December Martin, KeithComment initial draft CSC review team report6 December CSC review team Discuss report and 7 December BartConsolidate proposed changes 8 December (by 17.00 UTC) DonnaFinalise report ad send draft to CSC 8 December CSC review team Meeting with CSC to discuss draft findings14 December 20.00 UTC

I’m happy with Keith’s changes From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Drazek, Keith via CSC-Review Sent: 08 December 2017 14:19 To: bart.boswinkel@icann.org; CSC-review@icann.org Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November Good morning/afternoon all. Thanks to everyone who contributed to this document. I have reviewed it and it looks good. I added a few suggested edits in the attached. Let me know if you have any questions about my proposed edits. Best, Keith From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel Sent: Friday, December 08, 2017 4:03 AM To: CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November Dear all, Please find included the latest version of the consolidated comments on the CSC charter, including Martin’s additional comments @ Keith: could you be so kind to look at document? Kind regards, Bart From: CSC-Review <csc-review-bounces@icann.org <mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Martin Boyle via CSC-Review <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> > Reply-To: Martin Boyle <martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com <mailto:martin.boyle.hertford@ntlworld.com> > Date: Friday 24 November 2017 at 01:06 To: Maria Otanes <maria.otanes@icann.org <mailto:maria.otanes@icann.org> >, "CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> " <CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> > Subject: Re: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November I think that item 4 was for me to comment on Donna’s comments: just missed completing the attached in time! From: CSC-Review [mailto:csc-review-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Maria Otanes Sent: 17 November 2017 17:34 To: CSC-review@icann.org <mailto:CSC-review@icann.org> Subject: [CSC-Review] CSC Review Team Notes, 16 November Dear CSC Review Team, Attached, please find notes from yesterday’s call. Next Steps can be found below. Have a wonderful weekend, Ria ---------- Timeline for next steps Who ? What? When to be completed? Abdala, Keith provide comments on charter 20 November Donna provide high level description of issues 21 November Bart description of process, ToR and basic info 22 November Martin Check description Donna 23 November Bart Detail high level issues identified using comments document 24 November Donna, Bart Prepare draft initial CSC report 1 December Donna, Abdala Consolidate changes to charter 1 December Martin, Keith Comment initial draft CSC review team report 6 December CSC review team Discuss report and 7 December Bart Consolidate proposed changes 8 December (by 17.00 UTC) Donna Finalise report ad send draft to CSC 8 December CSC review team Meeting with CSC to discuss draft findings 14 December 20.00 UTC