Dear Jaap, Thank you for your review and feedback. Staff will review the formatting and content of the frames. Kind regards, Emily On 25/01/17 04:48, "Jaap Akkerhuis" <jaap@NLnetLabs.nl> wrote: Emily Barabas writes: > Please find attached a revised version of the CWG-UCTN Interim Paper. > This version incorporates language to reflect a lack of consensus on > recommendation 3. > > > Kindly provide any final revisions or comments on the Interim Paper by > Friday 3 February. Dear Emily, I did a quick scan and noticed that something went with the two "Frames" about the ISO 3166. They now look as a single one to me. But apart from that, the first one seemed to have a garbled sentences here and there. Note the start of the second section, to quote: The ISO body responsible for the standard 3166 is the Technical Committee 46, systems etc. and as non-current, dependencies, and other areas of particular geopolitical interest (ISO/TC 46/WG2). And there are more of these. I will have a nore close read later, but these things really needs to be clean up. Regards, jaap