Dear Alexander, Timo, Jaap, all, Thank you for your comments to date. As Emily already indicated in her email, at the direction of the co-chairs staff solicited your substantive comments on the proposed recommendations. As to the substantive comments made on the other parts of the draft: it is my understanding that the W`G agreed that these should be submitted as part of the public comment. In addition, and as always, editorial comments, correction of typo’s etc. are welcome and they will be included in the Interim report. If you have any (additional) comments on the proposed recommendations, please submit them as soon as possible. Timeline Public comment interim report On the latest WG meeting the members agreed that the Interim Paper should be published well before the Copenhagen ICANN meeting to publish the Interim paper well in time for that meeting. To meet that deadline staff proposes to publish the paper by the end of next week, and keep the public comment period open well beyond the Copenhagen ICANN meeting, to allow the community ample of time to discuss and comment on the Interim Paper. Proposed overall timeline Once the public comment period is closed, staff needs to summarize comments received, the WG is expected to analyze and review the comments and, if considered reasonable the Interim paper will need to be updated, before submitting the final paper to the chartering organizations for their consideration. Taking these steps into account, the overall timeline will look like: · Public comment 9 February – 23 March (49 days) · Summary of comments (staff) 24 March – 6 April · WG analysis and response 7 April – 28 April · Update Interim report taking into account comments received 1 May – 26 May ( 2 meetings) · Final paper/ Final report WG 29 may - 9 June 2017 · Submission Final report to ccNSO and GNSO Councils + publication 12 June 2017 Kind regards, Bart -----Original Message----- From: ctn-crosscom-bounces@icann.org<mailto:ctn-crosscom-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:ctn-crosscom-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Emily Barabas Sent: Wednesday, January 25, 2017 10:26 PM To: Jaap Akkerhuis <jaap@NLnetLabs.nl<mailto:jaap@NLnetLabs.nl>> Cc: ctn-crosscom@icann.org<mailto:ctn-crosscom@icann.org> Subject: Re: [Ctn-crosscom] [Ext] Re: Interim Paper for public comment Dear Jaap, Thank you for your review and feedback. Staff will review the formatting and content of the frames. Kind regards, Emily On 25/01/17 04:48, "Jaap Akkerhuis" <jaap@NLnetLabs.nl<mailto:jaap@NLnetLabs.nl>> wrote: Emily Barabas writes: > Please find attached a revised version of the CWG-UCTN Interim Paper. > This version incorporates language to reflect a lack of consensus on > recommendation 3. > > > Kindly provide any final revisions or comments on the Interim Paper by > Friday 3 February. Dear Emily, I did a quick scan and noticed that something went with the two "Frames" about the ISO 3166. They now look as a single one to me. But apart from that, the first one seemed to have a garbled sentences here and there. Note the start of the second section, to quote: The ISO body responsible for the standard 3166 is the Technical Committee 46, systems etc. and as non-current, dependencies, and other areas of particular geopolitical interest (ISO/TC 46/WG2). And there are more of these. I will have a nore close read later, but these things really needs to be clean up. Regards, jaap _______________________________________________ Ctn-crosscom mailing list Ctn-crosscom@icann.org<mailto:Ctn-crosscom@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ctn-crosscom _______________________________________________ Ctn-crosscom mailing list Ctn-crosscom@icann.org<mailto:Ctn-crosscom@icann.org> https://mm.icann.org/mailman/listinfo/ctn-crosscom