Yeah Becky Burr Sent from my iPhone On Aug 13, 2014, at 19:08, "Julie Hammer" <julie.hammer@bigpond.com<mailto:julie.hammer@bigpond.com>> wrote: Good morning everyone, Thanks to you all, it's been a good team to work with. Special thanks to Grace and Marika for their wonderful support throughout this process. Now that all the track changes have been removed, I found a couple more trivial typos which I have corrected in the attached version, now dated 14 August rather than 13 August. The changes I have made are: - Changed "uniquely effected" to "uniquely affected' in Section III Item 4 - Added a close bracket ")" after "(eg special-use registry" in Section III Item 9 - Deleted an unnecessary full-stop in Section IV second dot point - Changed "care should be taking" to "care should be taken" in Section V third para I have NOT used track changes, so the attached document is hopefully 'ready to go'. In the event that there are non-trivial changes proposed by any of our chartering organizations, I guess there is a chance that our co-chairs may need to consult us either by email or call us together for one more teleconference. Hopefully, this will not be necessary. I look forward to seeing you all in LA. Cheers, Julie On 14 Aug 2014, at 5:33 am, Duchesneau, Stephanie <Stephanie.Duchesneau@neustar.us<mailto:Stephanie.Duchesneau@neustar.us>> wrote: Great work all -- and by deadline. Stephanie Duchesneau Neustar, Inc. / Public Policy Manager 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, 4th Floor, Washington, DC 20006 Office: +1.202.533.2623 Mobile: +1.703.731.2040 Fax: +1.202.533.2623 / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz/> ________________________________ The information contained in this email message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this email message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message. From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Burr, Becky Sent: Wednesday, August 13, 2014 1:03 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Allan MacGillivray; Grace Abuhamad; Julie Hammer; Marika Konings Cc: CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Final Draft Charter Agree – very good work! J. Beckwith Burr Neustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006 Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 / becky.burr@neustar.biz<mailto:becky.burr@neustar.biz> / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz/> From: <Gomes>, Chuck Gomes <cgomes@verisign.com<mailto:cgomes@verisign.com>> Date: Wednesday, August 13, 2014 at 12:47 PM To: Allan MacGillivray <allan.macgillivray@cira.ca<mailto:allan.macgillivray@cira.ca>>, Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org<mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>>, Julie Hammer <julie.hammer@bigpond.com<mailto:julie.hammer@bigpond.com>>, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> Cc: "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Final Draft Charter It has been a great team to work with. Chuck From: cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org> [mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Allan MacGillivray Sent: Wednesday, August 13, 2014 10:47 AM To: Grace Abuhamad; Julie Hammer; Marika Konings Cc: CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Final Draft Charter I think that this is an excellent product. Milton Mueller has even characterized it as being ‘impressive’<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v1/url?u=http://www.internetgovernance.org...>. Congratulations to everyone who worked on it. Allan From:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org<mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org>[mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]<mailto:[mailto:cwg-dt-stewardship-bounces@icann.org]>On Behalf Of Grace Abuhamad Sent: August-13-14 10:16 AM To: Julie Hammer; Marika Konings Cc: CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org> Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Final Draft Charter Hi all, Attached is the final version of the draft charter. I've included the name change requested by Allan and the edits by Julie. I linked to the 3 documents that Becky circulated instead of creating an Annex. The documents are easily accessible. Please let me know if I missed anything. Grace From: Julie Hammer <julie.hammer@bigpond.com<mailto:julie.hammer@bigpond.com>> Date: Wednesday, August 13, 2014 3:50 AM To: Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> Cc: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org<mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>>, "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August Hi Marika, ...or, if those documents are easy to access, then we can just include a reference and not worry about an annex. Works for me either way. I will defer to Becky on this one. Cheers, Julie On 13 Aug 2014, at 5:00 pm, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org>> wrote: In relation to item 2, I believe the reference is to the following documents: https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/48347144/IANA%20Function%20Summary%20Chart.docx?api=v2<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v1/url?u=https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/48347144/IANA%2520Function%2520Summary%2520Chart.docx?api%3Dv2&k=lQ50IrZ4n2wmPbDBDzKBYw%3D%3D%0A&r=1J%2BU11wfJSXOLgU2NzyyPtxJzuvGV4bYQHowOGDBoZw%3D%0A&m=fGuifeWx1RxcEy3yP%2FjFwJUzh%2B%2BjLA01F990JIkPDxI%3D%0A&s=f8a704dc8366665936cca4de8d3c8308055bce9f274836057f3479c30e5c349e> andhttps://community.icann.org/download/attachments/48347144/IANA%20SOW%20Summary.docx?api=v2<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v1/url?u=https://community.icann.org/download/attachments/48347144/IANA%2520SOW%2520Summary.docx?api%3Dv2&k=lQ50IrZ4n2wmPbDBDzKBYw%3D%3D%0A&r=1J%2BU11wfJSXOLgU2NzyyPtxJzuvGV4bYQHowOGDBoZw%3D%0A&m=fGuifeWx1RxcEy3yP%2FjFwJUzh%2B%2BjLA01F990JIkPDxI%3D%0A&s=a4cad2476f0b8b8567ad09325831096f194ac017ebba7de28fd1f7f5246dde68> , which were provided by Becky at the start of the DT's deliberations which are also posted on the DT wiki page (https://community.icann.org/x/CLjhAg<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v1/url?u=https://community.icann.org/x/CLjhAg&k=lQ50IrZ4n2wmPbDBDzKBYw%3D%3D%0A&r=1J%2BU11wfJSXOLgU2NzyyPtxJzuvGV4bYQHowOGDBoZw%3D%0A&m=fGuifeWx1RxcEy3yP%2FjFwJUzh%2B%2BjLA01F990JIkPDxI%3D%0A&s=ac904cfc4f89464c1bdfc31374b5758d2a67d3ba889462f7acff490666a99c09>). One is a function summary and the other one a statement of work summary. If this is indeed correct, we can include both documents in the annex to the charter. Best regards, Marika From: Julie Hammer <julie.hammer@bigpond.com<mailto:julie.hammer@bigpond.com>> Date: Wednesday 13 August 2014 00:34 To: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org<mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>> Cc: "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: Re: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] 6 hours left -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August Hi Grace and good morning everyone, I've had a final look through the document and all the emails that have come in overnight. I agree with the change of title proposed by Allan, I am happy with the revised wording covering consensus, and also happy with all the other proposed edits with a couple of small suggestions in the section titled 'Scope'. 1. The words that Grace captured in our teleconference regarding scope exclusions currently read: For greater certainty, issues related to naming policy e.g. delegation, redelegation or revocation of ccTLDs, RAA related policy issues etc. are not within the scope of the CWG. I find the phrase 'For greater certainty' a little awkward. As this sentence follows another sentence about an exclusion, can I suggest we change this phrase to simply 'Additionally'? This would then read: The issue of who performs the Root Zone Maintainer (RZM) role is not in scope for the CWG and should be dealt with in a subsequent effort as needed. Additionally, issues related to naming policy e.g. delegation, redelegation or revocation of ccTLDs, RAA related policy issues etc. are not within the scope of the CWG. 2. I also note that the second sentence under the heading 'Scope' states: The Annex to this Charter contains a summary and description of the IANA functions drawn from the NTIA’s statement of work for that IANA contract. That Annex still needs to be added or the reference to it removed. Cheers, Julie On 13 Aug 2014, at 4:00 am, Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org<mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>> wrote: Hi all, Just a quick reminder that we are 6h away from our final edits deadline. From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org<mailto:grace.abuhamad@icann.org>> Date: Monday, August 11, 2014 9:59 PM To: "CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>" <CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org<mailto:CWG-DT-Stewardship@icann.org>> Subject: [CWG-DT-Stewardship] Latest Draft Charter -- Final Edits due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!) Hi all, Attached are two versions of the updated draft charter (redline and clean). I used Stephanie's "minor edits" document as the base for the rest of the proposed changes. I've outlined the changes I made for your reference: * Section II: Included Julie's text (first sentence of "Goals & Objectives" section) * Section III: Deleted everything except for the first sentence in point 2 of the work plan, upon Chuck's suggestion. * Section IV: * Included Stephanie's text. * Completed text relating to staff assignment in "Staffing & Resources" (Grace/Staff). * Included Allan's text on resourcing (can the DT confirm the placement of the text in the charter?). Note: I am missing text from Byron, but I left the text discussed on the call as a placeholder. Final edits are due at 23:59 UTC on 12 August (in 22 hours!). 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