All I’ve just realised in sending this message that I have included an email thread that was not intended for this list. I would appreciate it if you could disregard the information contained following my signature. Thanks for understanding. Donna [Description: Description: Description: ARI Logo]DONNA AUSTIN Policy and Industry Affairs Manager ARI REGISTRY SERVICES Melbourne | Los Angeles P +1 310 890 9655 P +61 3 9866 3710 E donna.austin@ariservices.com<mailto:donna.austin@ariservices.com> W www.ariservices.com<http://www.ariservices.com/> Follow us on Twitter<https://twitter.com/ARIservices> The information contained in this communication is intended for the named recipients only. It is subject to copyright and may contain legally privileged and confidential information and if you are not an intended recipient you must not use, copy, distribute or take any action in reliance on it. If you have received this communication in error, please delete all copies from your system and notify us immediately. From: Donna Austin Sent: Thursday, 8 January 2015 6:15 PM To: cwg-stewardship@icann.org Subject: RySG analysis of public comments Importance: High All In the interests of sharing, a group of RySG members conducted our own analysis of the comments submitted on the CWG Transition Proposal. Provided below are our conclusions and recommendations for next steps. Also attached is a document we prepared containing key excerpts of comments as they relate to various aspects of the proposal. Please accept this information in the spirit that it is offered—not as authoritative but as the result of an analysis developed by the RySG for our own purposes. We (Chuck, Stephanie, Sarah and myself) will be happy to answer any questions. RySG IANA CWG Team Conclusions regarding ongoing work of the IANA CWG The RySG believes that the following statements have very strong support in the community and hence can be used to guide future decisions by the CWG: A. The current service of the IANA functions operator is satisfactory and ICANN should initially continue as the operator when the transition occurs. B. The IANA CWG proposal as described in the request for public comments is too complex and does not contain enough detail. Of the four elements of the proposed IANA CWG proposal, there appears to be reasonable support for the CSC, MRT and IAP in some form, although not necessarily as described in the CWG proposal. The RySG believes that the following statements need further investigation and/or indicate areas where additional work is warranted: i. The overall structure of the CWG proposal. ii. Contract Co. iii. Internal to ICANN option RySG IANA CWG Team Recommendations regarding Next Steps 1. Suggestions made by commenters should be evaluated based on the following criteria to identify which ones should be excluded, which ones should definitely be considered further and which ones need further investigation: a. CWG principles b. Would they contribute toward a simpler proposal? c. Results of the two surveys. 2. All alternatives to the CWG proposal should be examined in detail, not just the one proposed by the ALAC, to identify what alternatives or elements of the alternatives should be investigated further. 3. An extension of the targeted time frame of at least 60 days should be requested from the ICG to allow for continued work and an additional public comment period after reasonable consensus is reached on a proposal for submission to the chartering SOs and ACs. 4. The work of the IANA CWG and Accountability CCWG are properly dependent. The IANA CWG should have the opportunity to revisit the CWG Proposal, ALAC alternative, and other options once the outputs of Workstream 1 of the Accountability CCWG are provided and consider the implications for accountability as it relates to the performance of the IANA Functions. Thanks, Donna [Description: Description: Description: ARI Logo]DONNA AUSTIN Policy and Industry Affairs Manager ARI REGISTRY SERVICES Melbourne | Los Angeles P +1 310 890 9655 P +61 3 9866 3710 E donna.austin@ariservices.com<mailto:donna.austin@ariservices.com> W www.ariservices.com<http://www.ariservices.com/> Follow us on Twitter<https://twitter.com/ARIservices> The information contained in this communication is intended for the named recipients only. It is subject to copyright and may contain legally privileged and confidential information and if you are not an intended recipient you must not use, copy, distribute or take any action in reliance on it. If you have received this communication in error, please delete all copies from your system and notify us immediately. From: Gomes, Chuck [mailto:cgomes@verisign.com] Sent: Thursday, 8 January 2015 4:25 PM To: Donna Austin; Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com<mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com> Subject: RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc Importance: High Thanks to all three of you for the good edits. The first attachment is a redline that includes a couple edits I made to the second paragraph and a comment I added on page 3 regarding the fact that the last two sections will be sent to the CWG list. Please let me know if you see any problems. I also attached a clean copy. The third document attached is a final version of our excerpts. Note I added an introduction. Donna – As our official rep, I think it would be good if you sent the documents as follows: · To the RySG & NTAG lists: o Clean version of the analysis o Excerpts document · To the CWG list: o The last two paragraphs of the analysis. o The excerpts document. Can you do that? Chuck From: Donna Austin [mailto:Donna.Austin@ariservices.com] Sent: Thursday, January 08, 2015 4:24 PM To: Gomes, Chuck; Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com<mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com> Subject: RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc I added the ‘internal to ICANN option’ as worthy of further consideration. Thanks, Donna [Description: Description: Description: ARI Logo]DONNA AUSTIN Policy and Industry Affairs Manager ARI REGISTRY SERVICES Melbourne | Los Angeles P +1 310 890 9655 P +61 3 9866 3710 E donna.austin@ariservices.com<mailto:donna.austin@ariservices.com> W www.ariservices.com<http://www.ariservices.com/> Follow us on Twitter<https://twitter.com/ARIservices> The information contained in this communication is intended for the named recipients only. It is subject to copyright and may contain legally privileged and confidential information and if you are not an intended recipient you must not use, copy, distribute or take any action in reliance on it. If you have received this communication in error, please delete all copies from your system and notify us immediately. From: rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com<mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com> [mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com]<mailto:[mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com]> On Behalf Of Gomes, Chuck Sent: Thursday, 8 January 2015 11:58 AM To: Duchesneau, Stephanie; 'King, Stacey'; rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com<mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com> Subject: RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc Thanks to both of you. I will hold off a couple hours before finalizing and distributing. Chuck From: rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com<mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com> [mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com] On Behalf Of Duchesneau, Stephanie Sent: Thursday, January 08, 2015 2:15 PM To: 'King, Stacey'; rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com<mailto:rysg-iana-transition-cwg@googlegroups.com> Subject: RE: Couple of Edits - Analysis Doc Thanks Stacy. Took a stab at tweaking/shortening a bit. I changed the recommendation slightly to provide the opportunity to actually revisit the proposals once WS 1 outputs are published. Please advise if this is not what we want. Also added revisiting other alternatives. Stephanie Duchesneau Neustar, Inc. / Public Policy Manager 1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, 4th Floor, Washington, DC 20006 Office: +1.202.533.2623 Mobile: +1.703.731.2040 Fax: +1.202.533.2623 / www.neustar.biz<http://www.neustar.biz/> ________________________________ The information contained in this email message is intended only for the use of the recipient(s) named above and may contain confidential and/or privileged information. If you are not the intended recipient you have received this email message in error and any review, dissemination, distribution, or copying of this message is strictly prohibited. If you have received this communication in error, please notify us immediately and delete the original message. 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