Regarding the CCWG dependencies document, I made one very minor edit and two substantial edits that are highlighted in the attached file that I think are very important. Chuck From: cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org [mailto:cwg-stewardship-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Jonathan Robinson Sent: Thursday, June 04, 2015 3:51 AM To: cwg-stewardship@icann.org Subject: [CWG-Stewardship] FW: [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments All. FYI. Please see attached from Sidley on review by them of the draft final proposal and in response to the CWG’s instructions managed by the CWG Client Committee. Jonathan From: Flanagan, Sharon [mailto:sflanagan@sidley.com] Sent: 04 June 2015 06:16 To: Client Committee; (cwg-stewardship@icann.org<mailto:cwg-stewardship@icann.org>) Subject: [client com] CWG Proposal - Sidley Comments Dear All, Attached are Sidley’s comments on the revised CWG proposal. Our comments are reflected in tracked changes to the marked version circulated on June 3 (word document titled Final Transition Proposal). We have also attached a redline showing only our incremental changed pages (pdf document titled Sidley Comments…). In addition, attached is a draft of language expressing the conditionality of the CWG proposal on the requisite CCWG accountability mechanisms. This is marked against current paragraph 105 in the CWG proposal. SHARON FLANAGAN Partner Sidley Austin LLP 555 California Street Suite 2000 San Francisco, CA 94104 +1.415.772.1271 sflanagan@sidley.com<mailto:sflanagan@sidley.com> www.sidley.com<http://www.sidley.com> [http://www.sidley.com/files/upload/signatures/SA-autosig.png]<http://www.sidley.com/> SIDLEY AUSTIN LLP **************************************************************************************************** This e-mail is sent by a law firm and may contain information that is privileged or confidential. If you are not the intended recipient, please delete the e-mail and any attachments and notify us immediately. ****************************************************************************************************