Hi, As a follow up of our progress, I would like to share the second version of the Internet numbers community's response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG) for your reference. Clean Version : <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft> Redline Version: <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control> The second draft is based on the CRISP Team's considerations for comments received on the <ianaxfer@nro.net> mailing list. If you have any feedback, please submit your comment to <ianaxfer@nro.net> mailing list before 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC, for the CRISP Team to consider as community feedback for the number resources component of the IANA function. Best Regards, Izumi Okutani The Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal Team (CRISP Team) -------- Forwarded Message -------- Subject: [NRO-IANAXFER] Internet Number Community IANA Stewardship Proposal: Final Call for Comments Date: Fri, 09 Jan 2015 01:21:08 +0900 From: Izumi Okutani <izumi@nic.ad.jp> To: ianaxfer@nro.net <ianaxfer@nro.net> Dear colleagues, Please find the second draft of the Internet numbers community's response to the Request For Proposals issued by the IANA Stewardship Coordination Group (ICG). This draft has been prepared by the Consolidated RIR IANA Stewardship Proposal (CRISP) Team, with considerations of feedback received from the global community on <ianaxfer@nro.net> mailing list. We have incorporated the following key points in the second draft: - Additional description on contract details, review committee and intellectual property rights - Description revised on Section V. NITA Requirements and VI. Community Process for more clarity - No changes are made to key elements of the proposal The CRISP Team have considered all comments expressed on <ianaxfer@nro.net> mailing list before the deadline of 5th Jan 2015, and would now like to make the final call for comments from the global community on the draft proposal, before submitting to the ICG. Second Draft proposal: ------------------------ Clean Version : <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft> Redline Version: <http:/www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-second-draft-change-control> The deadline for providing feedback: Mon, 12 January 2015 23:59 UTC Feedback should be sent to : <ianaxfer@nro.net> mailing list Community Inputs Considered by the CRISP Team: ------------------------------------------ You can check the status of the issues raised by the community and proposed the CRISP Team positions at: <http://www.nro.net/crisp-iana-xfer-summary-discussion-08012015> Key dates: ----------- Second draft to be published : 8 Jan 2015 Second draft comments close : 12 Jan 2015, 23:59 UTC Final proposal to be sent to ICG : 15 Jan 2015 How to Engage in Discussions: ----------------------------- All global discussions, for the CRISP team to consider as community feedback, will be conducted at <ianaxfer@nro.net> mailing list. All the CRISP Team discussions are open to observers. Next Step: ----------- In developing the final draft based on further feedback, the CRISP Team will ensure it has completed considerations of all substantial issues raised by the global community, which are compiled in the published issues list. The proposal will only incorporate issues that the CRISP team believes have received consensus support from the community. References: ------------ * Discussions by the CRISP Team Details of all the CRISP team's work to date, including recordings, minutes and agendas of all the CRISP Team teleconferences and a public archive of the internal CRISP team mailing list, are available at: https://nro.net/crisp-team * Other links: - The ICG request for proposals: <https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-3-2014-09-03-en> - The IANA Stewardship Transition Discussion in each RIR region: <http://www.nro.net/timeline-engagement> - First Draft proposal (Edited version) <http://www.nro.net/crisp-proposal-first-draft-1-1> _______________________________________________ ianaxfer mailing list ianaxfer@nro.net https://www.nro.net/mailman/listinfo/ianaxfer