Dmitry, do You need anything else? I am waiting for 1. and 2. to arrange and send to the list for voting. Dusan On 3.11.2015 18:12, Dmitry Kohmanyuk wrote:
Thanks Sarmad for this document.
I would propose multiple changes to it, in three groups:
1) typos/corrections (not changing meaning, just improving readability); 2) some structural changes (order of sections, again, mostly to improve comprehension); 3) some more controversial / to be discussed and not necessarily agreed by others - later.
As I don't use Microsoft tools I plan to offer edits in text format (possibly as table). Dusan, can you help me incorporate changes so updated document draft can be shared? Of course, this does not mean everything has to be accepted - mostly it's about 1) and 2).
I am asking strictly for help with editing. Thanks!
On 3 нояб. 2015, at 14:28, Sarmad Hussain <sarmad.hussain@icann.org> wrote:
Dear All,
Here is the latest version of the proposal with me for your review.
Regards, Sarmad
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