Thank-you Marika, I have made an editorial review of the document and, I trust, improved the clarity or detail in various places. In addition to the editorial changes (all visible in the attached redline), I have highlighted one are which I edited. At minimum, I’d like to discuss the highlighted area and the edits made in this area in order to ensure that they are consistent with what was intended. Look forward to wrapping up this draft tomorrow and committing to the schedule ahead. Jonathan From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings@icann.org] Sent: 07 September 2016 20:23 To: dt-cwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org Subject: [Dt-cwg-auctionproceeds] REMINDER Re: For your review - 'final' version of new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG Charter Reminder – please review the latest version of the charter and flag any items you think require further DT discussion prior to Friday 9 September. Thanks, Marika Marika Konings Senior Policy Director & Team Leader for the GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org <mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses <http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages <http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...> . From: <dt-cwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org <mailto:dt-cwg-auctionproceeds-bounces@icann.org> > on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org <mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> > Date: Friday 2 September 2016 at 15:17 To: "dt-cwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org <mailto:dt-cwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> " <dt-cwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org <mailto:dt-cwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org> > Subject: [Dt-cwg-auctionproceeds] For your review - 'final' version of new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG Charter Dear All, Please find attached for your review the latest version of the new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG Charter which includes the edits discussed during the DT’s call earlier this week as well as those items that were assigned to Sam and Erika (note, all previous changes were accepted and comments addressed removed). Please review this version and flag any items you think require further DT discussion before the next DT meeting which has been scheduled for Friday 9 September at 14.00 UTC. As discussed, in relation to next steps, the proposed timeline is as follows: * 2 September – circulation of ‘final’ version of charter * 9 September – deadline for any further edits / comments (a DT call has been scheduled to resolve any remaining issues, if needed) * 12 September – submit proposed charter to ICANN SO/AC with the request to identify any items that would prevent adoption of the charter by 30 September at the latest, including an indication of when the SO/AC may be able to consider the charter for approval if it is confirmed by 1 October that there are no changes to the charter. * October/November – adoption of charter by SO/ACs * December – first meeting of CCWG Best regards, Marika Marika Konings Senior Policy Director & Team Leader for the GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org <mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses <http://learn.icann.org/courses/gnso> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages <http://gnso.icann.org/sites/gnso.icann.org/files/gnso/presentations/policy-e...> .