Dear Keith, Can you please confirm you have noted these suggested edits by Ayden and that you will update your document? If no one has any objection to them, may i suggest these edits be incorporated in the latest version of the draft charter? Thanks, Arsene ----------------- Arsène Tungali, about.me/ArseneTungali +243 993810967 GPG: 523644A0 Goma, Democratic Republic of Congo Sent from my iPhone (excuse typos)

On Jun 27, 2018, at 11:23 PM, Ayden Férdeline <icann@ferdeline.com> wrote:

Thank you for preparing this, Keith.

I do not support other SO/ACs being able to appoint 3 members each. I prefer the original language that they only be permitted to appoint 1 member each (and 1 alternate).

I remain concerned with the first bullet point, and prefer the original text that members be appointed by Stakeholder Groups. How each Stakeholder Group organises itself internally to appoint its own membership composition is its own prerogative.

Similarly, in regards to bullet point # 9 on establishing consensus, I would like this to be revised from "SG/C" to "Stakeholder Group."

In regards to bullet point # 12, please revise from, "The CPH must not be disadvantaged as a result during any assessment of consensus" to "Neither the CPH nor NCSG of the NCPH may be disadvantaged as a result during any assessment of consensus."

Thank you again for working on this, Keith.

Best wishes,

Ayden Férdeline

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On 27 June 2018 10:10 PM, Drazek, Keith via Epdp-dt <epdp-dt@icann.org> wrote:

Hi all,

Attached is my updated version of the membership structure (following this mornings discussion), and also some very preliminary proposed text for the eventual resolution.

Please send comments!!

Thanks,

Keith

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