Dear Marika, Please find the file attached with only one comment added. Regards Hadia ________________________________ From: Gnso-epdp-team <gnso-epdp-team-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> Sent: 08 November 2018 23:46 To: GNSO EPDP Subject: [Gnso-epdp-team] For your review - updated language natural vs. legal Dear All, Per action item #2 from today's meeting (Support Staff will rework language for natural vs. legal persons and send to the mailing list so that EPDP Team members can include and/or correct their own viewpoints. Please propose edits by tomorrow, Friday, 9 November.), please find attached the updated language. On pages 1-3 you can find the clean version, on pages 4-6 the redline, for those interested. For those that expressed an interest to add their view points to this language, please share your proposed additions by Friday 9 November COB. These additions are expected to be added to the yellow highlighted part of the text. Best regards, Caitlin, Berry and Marika Marika Konings Vice President, Policy Development Support - GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) Email: marika.konings@icann.org<mailto:marika.konings@icann.org> Follow the GNSO via Twitter @ICANN_GNSO Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__learn.icann.org_courses_...> and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages<https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=http-3A__gnso.icann.org_sites_gns...>.