Dear all, I hope this email finds you well. I waited with the sending out of the agenda until today as it is the deadline that James marked in his email last week (see below). So far I have received no edits. In light of that, please find below the suggested agenda for Monday¹s call. Best wishes, Lars IRTP Part D PDP Working Group Meeting 9 September 2014 15.00 UTC 1. Roll Call/SOI Update 2. Review of Final Report especially GDD comments 3. Review next steps and confirming next meeting From: James Bladel <jbladel@godaddy.com> Date: Friday, 29 August 2014 17:15 To: Lars HOFFMANN <lars.hoffmann@icann.org>, "gnso-irtpd@icann.org" <gnso-irtpd@icann.org> Subject: Re: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report Thank you, Lars. Team: Given that we have next Monday off, please use the time between now and our next call (8 September) to review the following items: 1. List of GDD comments provided by Lars (below) 2. Text of Recommendations 3. Overall proof-reading and readability. Please submit your comments/edits to the list no later than Saturday 6 September! Otherwise they will need to be raised during our call. Thanks J. From: Lars Hoffmann <lars.hoffmann@icann.org> Date: Friday, August 29, 2014 at 9:36 To: "gnso-irtpd@icann.org" <gnso-irtpd@icann.org> Subject: [gnso-irtpd] Updated Report Dear all, Apologies for the late distribution of this update but thanks to the slight delay I was able to include comments from ICANN's GDD Team that might be useful to the Group¹s discussion. It would be great if you found some time to go through the Report especially the recommendations and observations in Section 4 and also consider the newly supplied comments from the GDD Team. Main edits from the last version are related to Charter Question F and the additional recommendations 18 and 19. These can be found on pages 26, 27, 28, 29 and 30 including the new Recommendation #19. Please also note the comments from ICANN¹s GDD Team on: * page 14 * Page 16 * Page 18 * Page 22 * Page 24 (two comments) * Page 26 * Page 28 (two comments) * Page 30 * Page 42 Finally, please note that for ease of reading I have started the latest changes from a clean copy, meaning that only the edits from the last version are red-lined. Many thanks and have a good weekend and those lucky enough to have Monday off have a great Labour Day, too! Best, Lars